This is an awesome story, and I don't think I've read anything like it. I feel as though the way Harry and Snape met would drastically improve Snape but also their relationship.

Great writing

got much better, very quickly :)

"Wielder", not a name i think you'd use again.. and likewise the insta-300 years training i think causes more trouble than its going to be worth for the writing. 300 years is plenty of time to get over all daddy issues, to decide on a personal philosophy, a purpose and to grow out of those at least a couple of times in favour of new ones...

fifty year old monks are a bit detached.. 300 years of spiritual training..

as much as I appreciate you giving us a end point or season finale as it were I thought for sure you would have had a little bit more fun with the time Loop I enjoyed this if you intend to do a guardian 2 I look forward to it thank you for taking the time to share your Muse with us

This was a great story. I truly enjoyed it thank you for writing it! I hope you eventually have the time and motivation to continue on as this was well written.

I feel as though the last chapter should have been a wind down and provided a proper epilogue, rather than introducing a new conflict and quickly wrapping it up. Just felt a bit stilted, and makes the ending feel way too sudden.

I’m back! I am a bit ADD with stories at times LOL, that’s why I have 38 tabs of different stores open LOL, anyway, background music is currently AFI. Hope you’re doing well

Thanks for another really enjoyable chapter

Once again that odd but awesome combination of deep wisdom and child like innocence. I mean he is a child, so not really childlike LOL, but his soul is also centuries old, honestly, this is just a confusing conundrum LOL. Whatever, just go with my original statement LOL.

One thing I really really like about Sabin, is his odd combination of extraordinarily deep wisdom and child like innocence and joy, it’s a strange combination but works wonderfully well when written in a very creative manner like you have. I have read characters that try to mix that as well, but just came across as foolish, and this character definitely doesn’t have that hindrance.

Definitely another really enjoyable chapter, I liked the minor merge that was going on LOL

Another really enjoyable chapter to be sure

Another great chapter, definitely enjoying the ride

Another excellent chapter that I thoroughly enjoyed

I’m great and is somewhat adorable enter the chapter LOL