Reviews for Naruto: A waring era story |
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Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2014 Ive been waiting and their still isnt a sequel? |
BlackWing84 chapter 13 . 8/24/2011 wright another please cause so far this s the best fanfiction ever but try harder on misspeled words |
LordHatredX chapter 13 . 9/20/2007 pretty good story i hope you continue it also you got this story in naruto/hinata this is more of a naruto/oc any ways u did a good job |
Tazaki4 chapter 13 . 9/20/2007 Um... when you say something is the best Naruto fan fic... maybe at least use correct... grammer sentance structure spelling As it was, I found it hard to understand... but that's just my opinion. Keep working on it. Good job, anyway, and get a program with spell check. |
DreadCraft chapter 1 . 9/20/2007 How old are you and what is your native language? I don't want to be overly critical but your mastery of the English language is... flawed to say the least. It is getting to the point where the mechanics of your writing, or lack thereof, is making the story unreadable. |