Love the story, quite short, but really it. Wish you could have added more chapters, or extended the story a bit. Keep up the good work!

Lily wouldn't smoke. She was too smart for that.

Other than that detail though I thought it had a really sweet ending.

wow...this was so sad...i wanted to cry!

I've read this story a few times, which in itself is unusual. Normally I read once, and move on. But your story keeps coming back to me, and I really must say that it's... breathtaking. Simply amazing.

Thank you for writing such vague and twisted, yet incredibly beautiful, words.

This is amazing, I beg of you to write more! You must make this a full length story, you are brilliant and it would be fantastic! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE!

Thank you for an amazing read!

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Wow..

That's all I can say D:

I think that the M rating is more necisarry for the content then the swearing. T would be all right for the swearing. Anyway love it. sad but great

Wow! That was great!When you say that he would give anything to see her smile again...It makes me want something like that,if you know what I not the poisoning bit,just the part when someone cares so much for you. Well, I hope to read more things from you soon!

Kipa

Um .. wow! I have to say thats a really .. special ff!

But .. yeah, wow .. its great!

Really ...

especially the last two sentences:

" God, it hurts, James."

" Shh, darling. Close your eyes. Ill take the pain away!"

... I would really like to read more L/J FFs or Oneshots! )

I like it, even though I was like, "What's the point?"

I mean, it doesn't have to have a point.

But, you know ...

Hm. I like it. I love, absolutely LOVE, the way James' reactions in the bathroom are written. Perfect. Wow.

Nice and random never hurt anyone, right? ]

i liked and it wasn't even that short