Excellent story you could feel the emotion smack you in the face.

havent even finished reading yet just need to voice my appreciation for the NGE references

Can’t find a guy more handsome then Sasuke.

Cough cough Ricardo

Ps. I’m not gay, it’s a meme

fuuuuuuuuck made me cry

Why would you do this to me?
The pain... good story.

Cries anime tears

It was too... Ridiculous? But otherwise written well and I guess everyone was character if exaggerated... I guess it was too immature in my opinion. But yeah. Nice idea!

I want to read Doki Doki Fantasy now.

It was moving and good in the story telling, except the part where Naruto is overpowered and the rushed ending. Sure he is the most powerful, but if it was so easy to beat the enemies, then the story would have ended long ago. Moreover, the way Naruto and Sakura reconciles with their feelings for each other was... Direct and unemotional, which is in contrast to how they actually felt for each other throughout the story.

But regardless of it all, it was a good read.

An incredible story with a bitter sweet ending.

this needs to continue and i wouldnt mind reading something like this if we get to k ow about how naruto wrote his books and see how far did jiraiya's vs his books go

Man...you made a really good story here. I am moved throughout the entire thing except the part where Sakura and Naruto go lovey dovey. I think you kinda rushed it just a little bit. But dang.. I really love your story. I hope you'll make another story that'll beat this one haha.

Anyway thank you for this can I say Heartfelt story and thank you for your hardwork.
Looking forward for next time.
See ya.

This was a very bittersweet ending, but it was done really well. I applaud you.

This is incredibly sad.

No comment, this is just that good, no questions asked.