Incredible! I loved how detailed it was! Great story!

I'm in awe of your writing. Thanks for a great story.

Nice job on the character development, I was teary eyed during the whole releasing of pent up anger and frustration scene, and I was able to smile at the renovations that were done to Nathan's room. Very nicely done, a little on the long side, but very nicely done.

Thank you for sharing the story!

really great story.

Once again, another wonderful story. This was definely one of your best:)

Good story! I like the new quarters for the family! Keep up with the good work!

Aww this is a sweet story. Glad no one is out to get Lucas anymore! :) Keep writing! You are doing a great job! LaterZ!

Great story, good character developments! I loved Nana and her pushing for the wedding in England. Overall I thought it was a very good story, both of them