vintage Roxas, sweet and low and all drawn-out like summer lemonade with the ice on the side

Oh my god. The ending made me cry. But this was so excellent, oh my goodness. Thank you so much for writing it.

THE END. MY HEART SHATTERED! ARGH it was seriously so fluffy and cute and I was awww-ing so bad but then the end had to go and utterly reduce my heart to a shamble of crumbles! IT WAS SO SAD. It made the whole cuteness of the story bittersweet, which I love, because angst is my fav thing along with fluff xD I'm super happy when writers mix it up and their stories become bittersweet! I think you did an amazing job with this! I think Roxas/Pence is the cutest ship, this has just made me ship them moar xD

BAW THE ENDING IS SAD! DDDD;

It was so beautiful, I love Pence. ;_;

lkjaw;efjalskjfdeal;kgjwlads that's just meeeeean, reeeallyyyyyyyy, here I am, thinking it's the most Unicorn Puking Rainbows-ish thing I've read, and that there's no way that any of Kingdom Hearts' typical depressing side can seep in, and there you go, making it canon. Again. AND IT'S STILL FANTASTIC.

ihateyou.

Except that I so don't.

Also, sorry for filling your inbox with reviews.

And yes, I am reading everything in your gallery under Kingdom Hearts.

- Anon

In all honesty i'm not really a huge fan of gay pairings but i really like your story. It's very well written. Nice job!

I love this There needs to be more Pence/Roxas, it's soo cute. 3

But... the ending DX I hate it that Roxas dissappears. I don't really like Pence/Olette to be honest. x.x

I think that I understand the ending, Roxas is replaced with Olette in the first day of school. Right?

Oh I loved Pence to begin with, but your characterization is wonderful! I never thought of Roxas/Pence before, but now I think it's a new pairing for me. I love the story!

D8 The end part made me so sad...but, that aside, it was a brilliant ending, really. Never thought of these two as a pairing before, but you wrote them really adorably. I love it!

-EtheG

“I blame the cupcakes,” Roxas says seriously. “You fed me too many of them and now I’m gay.”

GREATEST LINE EVER.

Oh my gosh, that was absolutely adorable. RoxasxPence? I honestly never thought of this pairing. It's really cute! I hope you write more of this couple soon.

*Splutters* I can't actually stop smiling at this, and I feel bad about it because of how bittersweet it actually is, because IT DOESN'T ACTUALLY HAPPEN! And it should!

Also, I adore that the details of everything goes do far back. And that Roxas doesn't like chocolate. It's just so like him to reject the mainstream. But the best part of the whole thing; Pence trying to make sea-salt cupcakes. Cutest thing ever!

I remember reading this some time ago and it's only after I re-read it do I get the ending. It only proves that people with A.D.D. are overpopulating the world. I really liked your story and I hope you don't mind me fav you ;

The very last part of this story completely flew over my stupid head but then I realized it and it hit me like a ton of bricks. Ouch ouch ouch. You ended such a fluffy story so sadly; poor Pence.

like the story also i am confused by the ending i dont have the nerve to play the game i cry alot just from clips i think id like never stop crying if i played the game