What did he do o.o

Loved it

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Great details. Great story. I LOVED IT!

awwwwwwwwwwww!

,why is the title 'that girl'?

It didn't suck. It was quite good. I liked the way you described the chracters, it's quite on character.

the romance was sudden cause he was like so mean but i do love it. i love the unexpected

I find it didn't suck at all. It was really rather good! :)

Very nice. I especially like the plot. And the fact that you made Tenten strong. Good job.

My only problem was one inconsistency. When Tenten was about to be tortured. Konan asked to know who the two Hyuugas were, right?

So, when she is being tortured in front of everyone, why the hell would she call Hinata by name? After all, she was rendering information she shouldn't, right?

Anyhow, other than that, this was great. Good job.

Neji is quite OC-ish but he rox! The ending was epicly perfect! I liked how u used konan as the main akatsuki member ...even if she died in teh end.

that was sweet

IT DIDNT SUCK IT WAS GREAT

If it sucked? YOU MUST BE CRAZY! it was AWESOME!

how could you ever think it SUCKED?

Neji should have got to fight more and you mentioned so many characters that ended up doing nothing. Many still consider Hinata to be weak but it was mentioned that she is now the strongest on her squad and still excelling so give ma girl a bit more credit although you did make her endure torture With that aside I can tell you that I liked it really liked it I'm going to check to see if you have any more stories since I'm reading this so late.

Great writing. I loved it, especially Tenten and Neji. and Neji's line:

“That is something only spouses may know.”

and him saying he'll hand himself into the Akatsuki if she doesn't marry him.

it was really good i loved the tortore not because i don't like tenten but because it was really well described but the ending was really good to it was an awsome story