Reviews for Must Be Loony |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked the start of this story. I really love how you write from Neville's perspective. I'm really confused if this is going to be a romance between Neville and Luna..or Neville and Marietta. It seems to be running towards the latter. If it is Neville and Marietta you're going to pair up - I suggest either changing the topic from "Romance" to "Friendship/Angst" or else change to Neville & Marietta as the main characters or people like myself will get confused by Romance Neville & Luna. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is amazing! It makes me sad seeing how old this story is, because I'm hoping in vain that you'll continue writing, haha. Either way I enjoyed reading what there is of it! Very well-written. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, wow. This is so good! I'm happy for Neville that he's such a popular teacher. (That probably sounds like a ridiculous thing to say about a fictional character in a fanfiction. Ah, well.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is... stellar. You write all the characters so well, and I'm really interested by the accuracy of it all to the books while still being able to make a story for a couple that... well, never happened. I can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was rather confusing to me... Update when you can! ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() You ripped my heart out in this chapter... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I always wonder what was happaningat hogwarts when the golden trio were camping. Geat chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awe, it's like a little reuinon/pep-talk for Nevil! Great chapter! ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() The letters in this chapter were brillent! Exspecially the first one, (Love Grama Longbottom's) and love the one on one interaction between the professors. Hint hint, lol ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() You got Nevil down to a T. This is exactly how I'd picture him to be. Still unsure of himself, but with burst of courage when needed. I'm just hoping Nevil gets the girl at the end. See you in the next chapter! ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was not very gentleman-like from Neville, simply forgetting about his date... Should be ashamed... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please, update soon, I so want to know how will Neville explain himself... (I do like him being good friend enough to not spoil Luna and Ralph's happiness.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! This is such an awesome fic, I really enjoyed reading it. I love how everyone acts so in character... and you're not writing a big cliche, either! I do hope you'll keep updating this, thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good! Sad at the end, but totally believable. ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() You write everyone's personalities so well! Really in character. |