Reviews for Keep Breathing |
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Guest chapter 18 . 1/4/2016 This took me under a week to read (probably would've finished it sooner if I wasn't so busy with everyday life) and I have to say... great story! I really enjoyed every minute of this fic. My only bone to pick is that the chapters were short... I wanted more! They were however, super detailed which was great! Gracie is a really great OFC too... very believable and likable. You wrote out Carter really well too, so kudos for that! And let me just say, I know just how you feel in regards to the show's writers, they frustrated me too at times. I never really cared for any of Carter's love interests through the seasons. Del Amico in season 4 was okay and him and Susan were cute when she came back to County, but otherwise... nah. Anywho, I see there's a sequel to this fic entitled, "The Difference" so I'm going to head off and start reading that bad boy. Again, great story! You're an excellent writer, please keep it up! |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/1/2015 Is Gracie meant to be black or a white South African? I'm confused. No prejudice, just wondering. |
M. Prime chapter 1 . 3/4/2013 Thought you deserved a review. :) Very interesting so far. You're research is superb (where do you get it all?) and I like the tone. Gracie seems like a very deep person, and at first she seemed unfitting for John. But, as I've read further (and am just to lazy to review on whatever chapter I just finished with) I've decided their budding relationship is fantastic. Character's are written with excellence and there's just enough mix of romance/medicine to keep the ER legacy alive! Love it so far! Signed, Knightress |
edwardfiend chapter 17 . 1/3/2011 This was an amazing fic! I loved it. :D I wasn't sure about gracie in the beginning, but she is a great character. |
ariaswan chapter 1 . 6/10/2009 i love this story- so excited theres another two stories after this! This is the first good ER story I have ever read- I love the way you have followed the events of the programme, and how seamlessly Gracie is woven into it. great job, I'm going to devour this very quickly I can tell! |
HeavenlyKitten chapter 17 . 3/2/2009 This was a great story! I enjoyed it from beginning to end. I absolutly love Carter\ OC stories. Great Job. |
DaleSnail chapter 17 . 10/31/2008 sequel! |
LaLa-036 chapter 13 . 9/7/2008 Theres not many carter/oc stories out there, but I love this one! Update soon, love Gracie by the way! |
DaleSnail chapter 12 . 7/7/2008 love it! ) i wonder whats gonna happen |
stikky-sweet chapter 11 . 5/31/2008 I tried to read this a while back and got sidetracked. So happy I came across it again today. I love this story. I wish stories with OFCs aren't always looked at as "mary sues" because excellent stories like this one get passed over. It's great that you didn't jump right into a relationship and not everything is exactly like the episode it's based on. It's all really enjoyable, and I hope you update soon. XD |
Volleyball Babe22 chapter 11 . 4/21/2008 AH! i don't think i saw that coming! but it's about time :P yay! well done! i can't wait for the next chapter! |
Volleyball Babe22 chapter 9 . 4/16/2008 Aw...well I love it still! i can't wait to see how the progresses! keep writing cuz it's awesome! can't wait for the update! :) |
PadfootCc chapter 8 . 3/11/2008 absolutely love the story! please, please, PLEASE update again as soon as possible! |
Volleyball Babe22 chapter 8 . 12/2/2007 Aw! so cute! :) this story just always makes me happy and brightens my day! can't wait for the next update! :) and I also have to say thanks for updating so often! |
DaleSnail chapter 8 . 12/2/2007 another great chapter! |