I adored Seventeen and I'm so glad it has a companion piece! And it's from James' POV yesss! I love how he sounds in your writing, he was so fun and mischievous and attractive. I enjoyed this immensely!

Really good! Not sure which one I prefer! Omg you are such a good author! Virtual hugs! Lara

this is really sweet

aww so sweet! lol. :) it's good. I 3 it.

Love, love, loved it!

...I think that completely sums up what I can say about it :)

Faviourite bit :

'I was doomed

Forever

I loved it'

Great ending, I had to smile, in fact I think I was smiling through the whole thing, just perfect!

and there'll be love love love when people read this

'cause it's a-may-ziiing

this rocks

you rock

everybody rocks

rock on.

~silverfox

I love your story. And I especially love this line - She's just there, and she's mine, and I am more than willing to be hers.

Wonderfully worded. Thanks for sharing this work! :)

this is so good. i love your writing!

i loved your story! the way you describe james made him sound like a real guy! i just loved it! thanks for writing .

This was brill. I love your writing of James. He sounds like a guy! Really, brill.

That was beautiful. I love it.

gosh that was amazing :D i love love love your writing style. i really do. and i havent come across many not-too-repetitive companion fics but this was great (: you should definitely write some more lily/james..

i LOVED this and seventeen. your writing style is absolutely fantastic. you capture the mood and the couple perfectly. i think you should definitely write some more lily and james fics. love the way you portray them.

:D Love it even beter! You've really got a way with words. The style you write with is just really simple and so natural. I really enjoy it and think you've done a fantastic job!

Oh, James! He's just the very cutest, sexiest, best thing in the whole world1