That was sooo brilliant! Nice one!

This is so Kitty, Hiding the fact that she still loves video games.

Great story.

Amazing! FAV!

Haha. Totally Kitty. :D

Some really awesome innuendos over here! I was raking through the words, trying to figure out just what Kitty and Bobby are doing but Video Games didn't even cross my mind. Epically hilarious and it's got some really great suspense in it. Lovely job you did on this short fic, it's great to read some less serious/lovey-dovey and more that make you laugh at the situation! Gotta give Peter credit for taking it so cool ;)

LOL

Ha ha ha! Good one! You really had me going there!

That was excellent, made me laugh at the end. kitty forever!

That was good. I was convinced for a while...good dialogue play.

Probably would've done what Piotr did.

~Jinx

Well this certainly was a nice surprise! I've spent a good half hour sifting through the crap on this site, looking for a good Kiotr fic. Most of the ones that say "kiotr" in the summary shift the couple to the background for more Romy angst, occasionally mentioning that my favorite couple are holding hands or eating cereal or something.

I really enjoyed this, I thought it was hilarious.

And I really like the beginning, with Piotr's "mission." If memory serves me correctly (which it probably doesn't) the X-men did a lot of normal aiding in the beginning... it wasn't all super villains and alien races.

So I really enjoyed this, even though I've never played Halo in my life, it was great!

Poor Pete! That was really very funny though. :D I think you had everyone VERY worried there for a moment or two.

Your descriptions are really good by the why. :)

Birthday fic, yay!

And a brilliant one, no less! Thank you! Everyone perfectly IC, and you even (sorta) force me to (maybe) like Piotr. Which, as you know, is a Huge accomplishment!

Thank you again!

The only thing that might have made that funnier is if Logan or one of the kids started hearing that conversation after Peter closed the door behind him! Good job!