Crack

Like it thus far wish there was more

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Species:human. origin: Gaia/Earth/soul. subspecies: hyper maxamus adaptus erectus hyper sapient overdrive break past limit evolutionus. galactic title: tari.
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The illusionary bunshin having illusionary explosions and covering the classroom in illusionary gore should've landed Naruto as a genjutsu prodigy, IMO. Unless the instructors were too (willfully) dumb to realize that bunshin can NOT fail like that unintentionally.

Oh my gods psychotic naruto is so funny. Drool a d pretends insanity, takes 'anti psychotics', casually threatens to burn down houses, mentions of meatbags, and viciously attacking zabuza. And sasuke. 'Duck' 'where'. Oh gods, i love this idiot.

At first i didn't like how naruto lost himself and how this magic system worked, in a way ninja were better as they train physically as well and their seals are equal to incantations so both techniques require a delay time so how naruto's magic works just didn't seem to give him an advantage other than using unknown techniques as he seems to run out of mana sooner than canon did with chakra. But it seems his abilities are stronger to compensate for this and more versatile. This is quite fun, but im sad his familiar isn't a kitsune. The chaos would have been unimaginable. Also, it seems everyone got over naruto's reappearance way to fast.

This is a great story. Not very many stories where Naruto can use magic. Atleast, not ones where Naruto doesn't have to go to Hogwarts. This story takes place in the narutoverse which i like. I hope you can continue this story at some point.

Hey buddy just wondering if you’re thinking about maybe updating this year

... at a certain point, I almost thought that you made Sakura a Shinigami, Bleach-style...

Anyway, I like your character progression, even if Naruto is still (very) overpowered from what I read :D

Noooooooooooo why does it end here the good stories are always unfinished...

The whole concept of Naruto having to relearn a spell every time he uses it is a bit off putting. It takes away from the story in my opinion. Good story though

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Again, another amazing story that has been forgotten or dropped. Well chibi, you may be a great writer but you're a terrible tease with these stories.

This had a lot of potential when it was abandoned 7 fucking years ago

Huh. But why not cheat? What if the 51 years were taken off an immortal's lifespan... like the Kyuubi? heh

I really wish this story wasn't dead. It's awesome.