I like the bombing idea with Kakashi, it's unique and well scripted

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow

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WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow

So after six years is there any chance of this story getting a reboot and or a continuation?

Truly one of three better chapters out of the last ten or more. The thing with the hawks is weird. Why any of them would be loyal to Sasuke and doubt Naruto at all is odd. UCLA ate known liars and betrayers, not Uzumaki. It doesn't seem like you though that out.

That fight was very Yu Yu Hakusho. I thought you were bashing some things around that character(Jin?) and I guess I was right.

Anko never really gets to shine. Booooo. Your naruto's power seems very inconsistent. All that training her did with Anko seems top have been for nothing. I also don't understand why he doesn't use his clones more. That dive bomb attack he used against kakashi was crazy powerful. Lastly; I'd have that training with mr. hat and clogs would've done more more him. I'm a not disappointed. I just wish you would order scale your characters more consistently.

I really hope there are deferments to Sasuke not learning tree climbing..

Why did you let them get punked by the demon brothers? Sasuke took one all by himself before and Naruto held his own after freezing up at first. Your writing style is good but I really feel like you agree thinking the story by making your characters weaker then they should be.

This was disappointing. You write well, but your choices are running this story for me. I realize that's silly a personal grievance, but still. This story would've been fast more interesting with far more Yoruichi and less kakashi. I'm so tired of his laziness and basically the boring bell test, even if you make the fight different the test plays out the same.

I really hate Sasuke and hope you had a good reason to put him on the the team. I'd have rather seen the interaction with the three and think it was stupid not to. I mean, Kurenai has no reason to be so close to hinata in this story. Since Hiashi kicked Hinata out of the clan after her mother's death he would've never asked Kurenai to watch over her. I personally think this was a bad choice but that's me. We've all seen Sasuke fall to darkness and i doubt you'll do it in any special way.

I skipped to the last chapter to see if it was a cliffhanger and... Wow why would u do that to me!?,?,? Us?!

Ur omake’s are so funny