Interesting story. I wonder if Erik gets his revenge against the Khanum.

:) I like what your doing... :))

whoa ... evil Khanum... :)

sad... but where from here ? short chapter :)

NOOO! Erik, why must you be so complicated. :( I've always had this little fantasy where Erik becomes a second daddy to Reza and marries Nadir. SOOO out of character and I would never write it either, but a little bit of comfort goes a long way.

Oh Erik. You poor thing. I hated that Bitch so much. This is so in character, it's sad. :( Argh. I sadly don't think she died in the damn book. Must continue reading!

Oh...to tell the truth,it's the most unusual fanf I've work!EN is a good pairing))I 3 it)

Please write to the end, I love it. I am eager to know. "What happens with Erik" and "he will do next, of course, this makes me love Daroga greater.

Oh my god! they(men)rape him! even Erik is ugly, but they rape him!

Oh... poor TT_TT Erik... I hat khanum, she was evil woman!

I began reading this story when you first started writing it, and let me say it keeps catching my attention. this is a very good story i think you should write more and longer.

Whoa...Now I wonder what will happen with Reza...Reza should make Erik feel better. Well half the time something nice happen to him he is crying. Just something I have noticed. Nice and dark, this part witb "Let me out" conjured some extreme images in my head.

Aw...poor Erik...good thing Nadir is with him, or I think he'd crack.

Evil Khanum! Evil Guard-people!

I hope this is updated soon.!

Dude. Update. This is a good story, I like the whole Destruction Of Innocence theme that is not so common with todays writers.

The part with "Do you want to hurt me too" was sad...Khanum is mean...EN is a good pairing. This is not fluffy...I like!

Why have you almost no reviews?

I thought you needed another review. That was very different. It was reminecent of the old K/S days. Is there more to come?