Please!we need a sequel!

Wow that was really good

Very well written! I normally don't like OCs, but yours was very well done.

Mewtwo sure is growing up quickly. A couple years old and he's already acting like an angst-ridden teenager! P

...Yeah, sorry. Didn't enjoy this one. The stuff that was supposed to be deep and introspective just came off as emo.

awwwww

thanks for this story

it was awsome

Very nicely done. You capture mewtwo's conflict with society exquisitely!

Amazing story! One of the best I've ever read! You deserve a award!

Very well-written.

I liked this! It was a good length - long enough to develop empathy for the characters, but also short enough to keep it it from getting stale.

I never thought about how Mewtwo acquired the cloak. Your idea makes the most sense. I cannot see Mewtwo buying something, both because he doesn't have money and because he would likely associate money as being a cruel apparatus for human society. Likewise, I doubt he'd steal something because he is ethical. So... for you to have proposed that it was given to him as a gift (even though he considers it an exchange; he's so stubborn!) is a cute and effective idea.

Something else I appreciated was Analise's inner beauty. From how you described her appearance, she was quite plain... but that was made up tenfold by her remarkable soul. This was a smart thing to do because otherwise she wouldn't have seemed as pure.

Finally, it was compassionate of Mewtwo to have helped her. He showed that he is essentially more human than Analise's attackers, the other sinners, and most of mankind.

Great work!

An interesting piece, to say the least. It probably would have had more effect if she had died, but your way works too. I like how you didn't make the girl appear all attractive or beautiful, and how the others admire her for her compassion instead. I guess I never really wondered where Mewtwo got that cloak, figuring that they just wanted to make him look even more dark and foreboding and full of cynicism than he already was, or that he just stole it off someone.

Mewtwo does feel emotions... Wow I thought he was kinda empty. I'm glad to know he doesn't just stand by and watch a innocent child's dying soul without trying.

This is by far the best Mewtwo fanfic out there. I think you portrayed him well. I always wondered where he got that cloak from. I like how you tied everything together. Excellent job.

So that's how he got the cape! *laughs in admiration* You're really good at oneshots, you know that? Especially the characters. It's hard to make good characters who don't overwhelm the story, but you did it!

I like it! Please make more like theses!

Hey Aeris...here's finally leaving you a review.

What can I say? I loved this. It was beautiful, and Mewtwo wasn't so much as an arse...and it answered the unspoken question about the cloak.

It is nice to see I inspired someone. That is always nice...

Kudos on this piece. I apologize for not being able to go into more description, pointing out my favorite bits and so forth...but suffice to say I really enjoyed it.

I needed something to enjoy. I need it now.

Thank you for this.

Let me move on to 'Rain' now.

~ WiseAbsol