Reviews for Over the Horizon
killernooch chapter 10 . 3/7
are dragon and owl Charlie and Ginny?
moodysavage chapter 17 . 6/22/2017
Apollo Draco
Aphrodite Belletrix's daughter or herself de-aged
Artemis Ginny
I thought Ares Harry but no-one else could travel dimension unless they were dead so that was confusing
Hades Snape or possibly Ron... but Snape is in the wrong age group but from the rest but everything else fits. And possibly rescuing people because they 'disappear' once he has them. And the spy who smokes the cigarettes... Pettigrew? As a spy?

I realize that it has been a long time since you updated and the story may never be finished. But I know you must have your ideas and plans on where it was going. Could you possibly just update with an authors note to let us know how it was going to turn out and who each of the mystery people were? For closure? Pretty please!
IM DYING chapter 17 . 2/26/2017
PLEASE UPDATE
The Farmer chapter 5 . 8/27/2014
You get all these stories of a super-powerful Harry going to another dimension, but in your story Harry actually has to work for it! I think that is amazing super awesome great! Harry just 'gaining' all sorts of gifts is my BIGGEST frustration, and you are the FIRST story in the thousands that I have read where he actually works for it. This is incredible!
FreelanceBum chapter 17 . 6/26/2014
Sad you never finished.
FreelanceBum chapter 16 . 6/26/2014
What a waste of Draco's information. Particularly since he wanted to know Un-Ginny's identity.
FreelanceBum chapter 13 . 6/26/2014
So I'm pretty sure the worlds are collapsing together. The ones dead obviously aren't affected, but only one of each is allowed in the combined reality. Curious if Owl will get Hermione's memories. Ginny isn't affected since her soul was replaced with a bit of Voldemort's, but it still prevents the crossover.

I wonder if Justin was getting sick, but is feeling better now?
FreelanceBum chapter 11 . 6/26/2014
I"m convinced Artemis is Ginny.
tchizek chapter 17 . 3/29/2014
Good story, I do hope you continue it sometime.

Tom.
00Agent7 chapter 17 . 4/13/2013
Great chapter. I hope you haven't given up writing, because you last updated early 2011? It's especially a shame because it sounds like you have most of 18 finished in your chapter 17 A/N... PLEASE tell me you're still writing!
Azrielle.Antoinette chapter 4 . 1/23/2013
Me gusta your disclaimer
Ophidias chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
I got about halfway through the first chapter before I had to stop out of sheer irritation. I'll start by saying even if I don't know where the plot is going that so far it has been pretty decent and I would be interested in seeing where you're gonna take it.

The problems: in dialogue, abbreviate. people don't talk like robots so your characters shouldn't.

Apostrophes (') don't denote speech. Speech marks (") do. its, y'know, why they're called SPEECH marks.

Your characters seem to be incapable of thinking inside their heads, they feel a need to think everything out loud. Its annoying.
Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 17 . 12/13/2012
to any other living being
What about a ghost, or portrait?
One time, Voldemort's body was turned to ashes, while soul remained anchored to the mortal plane; another time, Voldemort's body is impossible to destroy, and soul has already departed.
Professor Trelawney and Peeves were in the middle of a football match, empty bottles of sherry magically congregated to form a goalpost at Peeves's end - who was playing Keeper – and Professor Trelawney in charge of the scoring, running amok with a crystal ball at her feet.
Unforgettable.
If you actually believe what I'm saying, I'll give you a bunch of singing geraniums for free.
May I see - and hear - these geraniums before you check sincerety of my belief?
Dumbledore in Azkaban?
That actually could make sense, if Dumbledore was either framed by a Dark Lord, arrested by Dark wizards, or revealed as one to condone child abuse.
Voldemort would suffer his wrath.
Harry, don't become a murderer.
Generally, I dislike Harry-Ginny. But this one... is the best of its kind. Ginny wants to be included in Harry's fights, and she wants to speak with Harry. She doesn't dream of peace.
although he would still need to acquire some books on the Dark Arts, something he was very much unwilling to do.
On the matter of this prejudice: there is no magic good or evil, there is only power and those too weak to use it. Killing Curse can be used for mercy killing. Crucio, if applied for the shortest second, might be used to check which parts of body are paralysed, numb, incapable of feeling pain. Imperio, if applied for a shortest moment, might stop a person from suicide. Snake tongue can be used for healing.
he felt that whoever had placed them there, he or she had done so with an extreme vindictive pleasure.
Potions Master Snape, Deputy Headmistress McGonagall, or Dobby.
Inferno Curse wandlessly? Why is Kingsley so surprised? As a Muggle-raised, Harry would not have mental blocks to stop him from attempting this, and the magic at his disposal turned out to be enough to do it.
So, Harry is already in another universe, Voldemort is still evil, Peter is still traitor, why cannot Harry visit Dumbledore in his cell and catch Peter in his Animagus form?
he had begun feeling guilty at the memory of the basilisk's death, as if he were nothing else but traitorous scum that had killed a fellow friend for no reason whatsoever
Maybe, the king, the liar, and the traitor, are lion, phoenix and basilisk?
Why is the united wand coloured red?
'Ares… Ares… Who are you?'
Good question.
His Excellency Dark Lord managed to get a confession out of the ancient warlock by means of Veritaserum, proving that not only had Dumbledore tortured the Minister's father but also murdered him!
Intriguing.
jabbing him with his fingers and started calling him "itty bitty kitty". Harry was positive Bellatrix had learnt her vocabulary from Kreacher.
Hilarious.
Harry gasped. Carved into his skin, as if it had been done cruelly with a very sharp knife, was one word: Disgrace.
Can Harry remove the curse without alerting the Dark Lord? Transfer it to a piece of Sirius's clothing?
'To kill the basilisk inside the Chamber,' he replied, ignoring the gasps around him.
Harry, do you wish to kill your kin twice?
Is Hades - our favourite Potions Master?
Artemis, Voldemort's favourite and adopted daughter.
Terrifying.
It's nice to have a friend that knows your real name and you don't have to hide under a mask and a codename when you're with him. Feels as if I had a life.
She is one of the five. No, I apologie; I hoped her to be the spy.
The "Renegades", they were called. Apparently the leader of it is British, but I have never seen him, I only know that his codename is "Dragon", and that's it.
Hmf... Not Draco. Charlie?
I just know that the order was sent by the Unmentionable Ares, and I'm going to kill him,
Ho ill you not confue your friend nd your eemy?
Devreux - Dumbledore?
I found him there, pale and as stiff as a board. After a few medical spells, I determined he was dead
Hmf.
'A very wise question,' McGonagall acknowledged, and all heads turned to face Harry, who, in contrast, was trying to shy away from them.
Harry, you alredy mentioned your phoenix form, didn't you? When meeting basilisk?
'don't worry James, I know the location of her Secret-Keeper, and he would give his life before anything happened to her.'
Severus and Lily?
Harry wondered briefly who could the Death Eater have been. The situation was screaming 'Snape!' at him,
Concur.
Harry quickly dismissed the second option. This was the Elite, they wouldn't be double-crossers.
Must I remind you about Severus?
It wasn't until much later, already in his bed, that a staggering realisation hit Harry making him choke: Bellatrix didn't have midnight blue eyes – her eyes were black!
Just like Harry's. Midnight blue. Why?
How can Voldemort's birthday be more important than Christmas Day, for Merlin's sake?
Do you care about Christ? I don't. Apologies to believers.
Trelawney turned out to be the Head of the Department of Law Enforcement,
Wonderful.
Owl's death brought Hermione to the world? Many others, too...
'I'm a Slytherin, you fool.'
Harry is also a Slytherin.
He was so ecstatic he did not notice a pair of red eyes following his every move.
Voldemort?.
For a fleeting instant before he flamed away, he saw amidst the blazing devastation the murderous face of Lord Voldemort.
Brilliant. It may surprise you, but I do enjoy seeing sane Voldemort.
Harry spun on his feet to see a weak yet still as unpleasant as always Severus Snape.
Thank you, sir.
Good day, good night, and good luck, Gryffindor, Hermione, Harry, Luna, Michael, Neville, Severus.
duhorcommonsense chapter 17 . 8/31/2012
a doom and gloom chapter followed by that song! genious
sysa chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
You know, you could have warned me, that the pairing is with that disgusting little slut weasel Ginerva. Yuck!
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