Holy... holy... holy...
Goodness. This was just getting good too.

And now, i will put this as my favorites! Good job on the story! Good plot, good spelling, and you added all my favorite characters!

This is really good. )

Wow, that was...unexpected. I didn't see an update coming.

Oh well! I like.

Divix is cool.

...I think what I meant was villains are cool. D:

Aggh! *heart*

Keep writing! It's starting to get rather well.

i exed off the page as soon as i saw ur pairings... so offense but i love Dimentio and that pairing sucks for him..

Ya jerks! *practically slaps most of them* Leave 'em alone in that bar! *gets glared at by the Piantas* Um... Yeah, 'K?

Wait. PODLEY HAS A GUN! *dives under the table* Don't shoot me, please...

"HEY! Leave him alone, you big fat meanies!" She sounds like Mimi. XD I think your sentence was cut off, though.

"The piantas turned around. One of-" :/ Was it supposed to be like that?

Eek... I wouldn't want to work for 'da boss' anytime soon. Too many mistakes, and I'd be dead! (Or wishing that I was. Geez.)

Poor guys. Take a magical card! XD Is that a hint for his song?

Could he be threatened any worse? WILL HE ACTUALLY BE REFERED TO BY NAME BY THE PIANTAS? XD

Aww... That's where his dad is. Good point, Francesca. To Maveras! Secret passageway... Neato. :D Sweet how he carried her like that, and awesome ship for them!

The first e-mail to the Mailbox DS... is from the Green Thunder? How did they get their names? (Hints at trying to hear the bet he lost. XD)

"Vivian, you can kill Luigi after we rescue him..." D: Eek for that and the message!

Cute ending to this chapter. :) It was beautiful how he started to change, liking her more and more. It'd be neat to see the next chapter up sometime!

~Hmm? What's this "little 'surprise'"? Is it about Maveras? The "'Seraphs"? Should I stop asking questions now? XD

P.S.: Um, I think some of the review to Chapter 3 got deleted... If so, press "Scream" now. AIEK!

So... Dimentio likes history, huh? Well, that makes sense, because he went well with a fifteen-hundred year old prophecy...

Nuh-uh, Vivian, I was laughing at his jokes too! XD Until they invovled Luigi's mustache. THEN things got down to business.

Um, I count eighty Koopatrols. Just sayin'. AND THEY WENT KABOOM! Sweet move, but scary to actually come in contact with.

Neat, there are more 'Dark Seraph's sure to be seen, right? They sound so creepy... Cool!

Wait! (almost slaps Dimentio) BLUMIERE WAS NOT WICK- Oh. At least he tried to fix it in the end...

I could just see them falling over at Professer Frankly's comment like Mario did. XD

*Critiquecal Alert* Maybe you should take out one of the two from the repeated phrase: "Luigi never fought Super Dimentio at the time, because he was Mr. L and a part of it at the time..."

Maybe just make it where he didn't fight him because he was a part of it at the time? (Well, just the same thing minus one "at the time".)

Sorry that I'm being annoying repeating myself somewhat!Otherwise, it's written very well! Wonder why it isn't so popular...? :/ *Thank you*

YEAH, KILL DIMENTI- Wait, no, stop! He's actually gotten a heart, it goes against the Rules of Timpani to do that now! And Vivian has some SPINE, talking in defense to Bowser like that! :D

Too bad that they almost died in battle against the D-Goomba. D:

Wait... He said 'Love'! Dimentio actually thought nicely about love! *rereads Chapter 2* AH, HE SAID THAT ABOUT THE WORLD, TOO!

Frankly, you foreshadowing jerk. You ruined this wonderful sense of progress! What's going to happen to him?

And there's more kidnapping from the mysterious "Wiz" guy...

GASP! Lord Divix! *curtsys* ()

Wait, what? 'Wiz' was talking about a "Lord V"! There's respect for his name (Sounds cool. :D), but confusion.

~Yay I want a Mailbox DS! His ringtone should be like his theme. (Kinda like Luigi's Mansion and the Game Boy Horror?) Could I have Luigi's DS? XD

CUTENESS ATTACK! SECURITY IS REDUCED TO JELLY ROLLS. YOU GAINED ONE FAVORITE STORY. WAY TO GO, GENIUS. (Fracktaily-ness, sorry.)

You're making the pairing of Dimentio and Vivian (no matter how strange that sounds by itself) adorable!

Hm? Doesn't the sun shine in The Bitlands? Yold Desert? Never mind, that's beside the point of where he lives.

Yay for more people like Podley! *claps for the innkeeper*

Cute! This pairing seems to hold promise. Make mental note to monitor Dimentio's sanity levels more closely. I will stop talking into a tape recorder by myself now. [click]

I like this, it looks well written so far, and the ideas of something new and unexpected work out pretty good!

~As for the title name, doesn't seem so dark to me. A new name? Um, Third Dimension of Shadows? (Vivian is the third Shadow Siren, so...) Nevermind! XD

As someone that I'm sure I don't remember would say: "Spoilereffic!" XD

...Aww! *completely squeezes Dimentio plushie to death* I'm sorry that Count Bleck like totally betrayed you and all now!

*twitches at the phrase "Super Dimentio"* Oh, yeah... That's why that didn't happen by itself.

Sweet. :) Podley and them being so nice, it makes a demented jester somewhat sane! Yay!

~More people like him, please. XD Maybe Dimentio will be normal-ish by the time he wakes up. :D

Ooh, I like how the two are starting to... er, click. Yeah, that's a good way to put it. Hope to see more from ya.

Love the Chicken!

~C. Miasma

Cool! I finally got around to reviewing this! Awesome job, if I should say so myself.

Love the Chicken!

~C. Miasma

cool i like the name Divix. it's kinda like the movie programer! lol good job!

really cool chappie. i never thought of vivian and Dimntio together like that! im toatally gunna keep an eye out for updates! :)