Ten years on and this still gives me the shivers. The frightening part of it is that it could easily happen in canon. Kudos!

This is such a powerful idea. Such a strangely coaxing one, considering how inseparable the brothers always are. I'm glad it ended well, though.

WOW! Your mind truly does work in strange ways. You seem to have a talent to thinking up the strangest things and turning into amazingly emotional and incredibly original fics that really leave the reader thinking.

Love your writing style, keep it up, Meg

Oh how I love how you write Ed and Al. So freakin' gorgeous and intense and touching.

Wow, another one that I've loved for ages and found again. This makes me shake and shiver and clench my teeth. One of the best things I've ever read. "Only you had that right, Al. Only you." - Wow. So likely him. Perfect.

What exactly happened? Did Ed sacrifice himself or commit suicide? Not to sound like a critic or anything, I'm just curious... and confused. Anyway, great story and I like how Al made the decision to keep his brother, instead of "getting rid of him".

love it so much!

made me depressed though.

*fave*

Wow. I really like this. A bit sad but overall happy. Al did the right thing, I know it! And in the end he got Ed back so what is there to be sad about! Really great idea. I love your writing btw.

Awww, What a great story, so original, and well written. I loved it!

Ed is so selfless sometimes ;_;

an FMA without ed

holy shit why do you make us think of these things!

and god. those last lines

'only you, only you'

i love them all-your stuff. i love them all.

this was amazing.

you should write edwards side of the story as well.

once again this was just, wow.

Whoa. Just... whoa. I'm a bit beyond words. That was intense, threaded with just the right amount of dread and wonder. It really made me think. Thank you for writing that, I enjoyed it a great deal.

wow...

One word to sum it all up: Wow!