Well Troy got there really damn quick. That whole thing about the entire basketball team ganging up on her is kinda unrealistic though.

Oh wow, that's some eventful shit. Couldn't put it down!

Whoa, that was REALLY trippy. Your first paragraph and my first paragraph of my work "Gabriella-Gabriel" totally mirror each other. I promise you I'm not writing this now, it's already written,
"The sun blasts through the gap between the curtains and perfectly aligns to my eyes, waking me from a rare consecutive seven hours of sleep. Still exhausted from last night, I force my tired limbs to turn me onto the other side. This small move costs me significant energy as I quickly fall into a deep state of unconsciousness again.
Enough time has passed for the sun to reposition itself to reflect directly into my eyes from the mirror across the room. I figure that if I can’t hide from our sun, there’s no way I can hide from my mother’s morning call. As though on cue, I hear four loud knocks on the door and my mother saying, “Vic, it’s time to get up.”"
Okay, maybe it's not exact, but it's really interesting how both of our very first paragraphs are this way. Odd.

I'm sorry for your loss. May he Rest in Peace. :(

I find it really disturbing that your characters have so much trouble controlling themselves physically. Its something that has been bothering me for a while, but this chapter literally just made me laugh. If anyone just "lost it" and actually punched a reporter in the face, they would be charged with assault at the very least. I just think its completely unnecessary.

Great story and i cried like there was no tmr for gabriella! You r an awesome writer :)

I would still be interested..You should come back!(:

I would be very interested in reading your stories as long as you re-post your completed stories because this story is my favorite story on fan fiction.

I STILL INTEREST YOUR STOYR I HOPE U WILL GET UPDATE LEEP IT UP

cooommmmmmeeeeeeeeee baaaaaaaaaackkkkkkkkkk

I still remember you! and i love all your stories and would love to read more of them :)

I will follow you either way old account or new account

funny how you wrote that its gonna be a two shot but ended up havin 33 chapters,anywaya luv ur story

awsome story

Thank you, BabyVhudgens101!

Awsome!

~Crystal