The story is good, but since it has the copied excerpts of the "Harry Potter and the Order Of The Phoenix" book, it breaks the following part of the Content Guidelines:

Actions not allowed:
3. Copying from a previously published work (including musical lyrics) not in the public domain.

Please remove all of the direct dialogue from the book and make the story so that the characters react to the book without using direct dialogue from the book.

I love this book so much and it really gives an insight into how the Marauders Lily would react while reading the books and if they were there in real life, if Voldemort had never killed them. I really hope you continue to update even if it has been 9 years since the last update...you have a lot of talent :)

I was low-key a little sad about Peter not being there for the Halloween prank but I mean you're not the first one to have kicked him out
At least there wasn't any Peter-bashing
Anyway good job otherwise nice story

I am so grateful to you for doing these fanfics coz u r only one of very very few who have actually done this kind of fanfic... And this idea had always fascinated me.. How would they react to their son fighting dragons.. And all. So thank you. You have written it very nicely.

Please continue, if you don't, i'll be sad :(

Since when does the room of requirements provide food? I am pretty sure it's one of the few things the room can't provide

"I mean it's not like I'll die"

Me: ah...um...er...

you r one of the few to finish any books for the lets read the books

About FOUR yrs..PLEASE updateeee!

wow this series is great! I hope that you update soon, I especially want to see them react to the DA and Neville's parents. and of course, Sirius's death. happy writing!

I was enjoying reading about the comments about the book and Pranks they pulled. I wish you had been able to finish it, but I understand that life happens and that the books are long. I'm glad you managed to finish the first 4 anyway.

Ooh, can't wait to see what happens next. I love your stories. It doesn't matter if you skip some, even if it is a tad confusing, but I understand.

Hy great story I love there reactions as well as reply. To what harry does. I can't wait for you to do a half blood prince. And deathly hallows I can't wait to see the reactions of James and lilly they find out about ginny and harry . The end of this book might be a bit sad especially when sirus dies. Another thing I'm looking foward to is the Snape ration for both when he kills dumbledore as well as the whole thing been planned. Please update can't wait good luck

Hi! This is one of the best Harry Potter's fanfiction that I've ever read. I really love it. :D
I know that you probably won't update it, but you think that there is a slight chance that you will continue it? As I said it's really good and I hope to see a new chapter. :D

I like how you are doing more scenes from fifth book than you did from fourth. I don't know how much hope there is that you'll continue the story but I like it so I'll wait :)