Reviews for The Denarian Knight |
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![]() ![]() After talking about how he has no friends and has no care for family (except for the fallen angel in his head...), and immediately uses a spell pertaining to friends in name/incantation. Hilarious. Don’t know if it was intentional or not (it definitely was), but it’s still awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry has been living in Chicago for years. Having lived through some winters in the Great Lakes region I can tell you it's miserable. Chicago is about as south as the Great Lakes region goes so they don't get it as bad as the Canadian side but it still sucks there. Weather in London is very mild, similar to Vancouver or Seattle, there is frost a few times a year, maybe it snows once or twice and then it's over and back to the cloudy season. I looked up London's all-time record low and it's -21C (-6F), Chicago averages two weeks worth of sub-zero days per year. I'm going to have to assume that Harry is just a little bitch who usually stays inside all day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m really confused as to why you made Harry into such an annoying, little shit? The only reason I’m still reading is because the story itself is entertaining enough. Even if I hate the main character’s personality. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i just LOVE Amaris. She is a genius! that nibble on Harry's ear xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know it might not be Harry's "style" but if a headshot is instakill for even a Denarian, then Harry should really start wearing a helmet. Maybe one with DERP written across it because he lost a bet with Meciel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jesus Christ. If I thought Harry was insufferable before, it's because hadn't gotten nearly close to this. Seeing him fail to keep his temper in check in vital situations is almost killing me, god, this is hard to read. He should be expelled already and just get done with. Just kill him lol |
![]() ![]() Has Maeve outsmarted herself? Another wizard?... Just someone else for Harry to kill. Have I mentioned that I favorited this? Thanks for a great story. |
![]() ![]() Harry needs to read the Evil Overlords handbook... He talks too much! |
![]() ![]() ROTFLOL! Great job with Harry bluffing Umbitch! Although I agree with Harry, she needs to die! The sooner the better... How much damage was done in the books because Dumbles wanted to give Fudge a chance? |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is to bad Meciel does not have a sister, Amanda with a coin would be great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Framing Malfoy! It is not done often... Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry is spoiled and immature, which I think you want to portray him as, but some growth would be nice. The temper and attitude is understandable, but he needs to learn some self control. Yes I know this story is complete. Have you read BRUTAL HARRY it on this site, and my favorite list. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dumbledore is too good. He doesn't act, he waits, inaction let's the other side win. Yes I'm pumping up your review count. Supposedly the more reviews, the better the story. I like this one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And when good submits, Evil wins. Law!? An evil law is no law at all! I hope you have written her messy Death. And I wish I could write half as good as you. What was Rowling thinking? What was she drinking? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Personally, I'm Grey. I have quite a bit of anger and bitterness in me. But I also have more self control than Harry. Still if I had been in charge then right after 9/11 both Mecca and Medina would have been hit by nuclear weapons. Terror? I'll show them REAL TERROR. We have about ONE BILLION people who believe that murder gets them into heaven! They could be ignored before the world became so small and connected. At the moment good is ignoring them. I'm not young, with luck I'll be dead before the world burns. Ah I'm ranting, but thanks for writing. |