aww omg that is so wonderfully angsty- yea the traveler cancellation is a double edged sword im sad because I loved this hsow so so much but I dont htink i could have stood watching Will and Tyler die - especially Will. Write more please:)

Great story! I teared up while reading it. *sniffle* Very well-thought and well-written, I thought you conveyed Jay's feelings very well. Fantastic job.

YOU KILLED THEM? WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU? it was good but sad! did you have to kill them? i'm getting teary-eyed as i write this review. Anyways i like your writing and you should write more traveler stuff, preferably with will and tyler living.

Oh, beautiful. Short, but sweet and chillingly. Very nice.

That was so sweet. I love your stories, you're a great writer.

~Pyrassion