I like this vignette, it's well-written and engaging. It raises questions, however, of how Luna and Hermione became a couple. I do hope you will explore this in the future. Best wishes!

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An interesting character protrayal and as a fluffy scene not bad at all!

Sadly i find myself with more questions left than this piece answers... how did they come together, why did Hermione change... might be that that is the reason i don't like vignettes and ultra-shorts...

Absolutely beautiful. The language you use is stunning, you have created a perfect moment, a perfect mood, and I'm going to go and read your other Hermione/Luna stories now.

I think this is good. And I loved the square peg;round hole thing you used. I think it goes with them perfectly.

You are the single best Luna-writer I have ever come across, and you have given so much to the community. Watching her sleeping through the equally lovingly written Hermione's eyes in this sweet little piece reminds me of what a wonderful, interesting and surprisingly well rounded character your Luna is. She is strong, but she can also be very vulnerable. She is loyal, but she is also very principled. She is strange and dotty, but she is firmly rooted in her own worldview and old traditions from a world of faeries and druids. She catalyzes development and change for her lucky friends, but at the same time they affect her. She is a character we love to love, and we can only envy Hermione sleeping next to her on the old mound this night. Thanks.

Utterly lovely.

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very surprising i never thought that i would find a Yuri fan in harry potter. not to mention about a Yuri fan fiction about two different young girls which is Luna and hemoine.

hey that was pretty cool. i liked it.

You have been silent far too long - but this adorable little ficlet more than makes up for it. Even more commendable as it so very blissfully ignpres the abomination that is called Deathly Hallows... The little details, like the spelling of faerie, are simply amazing and make these soul mates so absolutely convincing. Who could even think of loud, blundering Ron? The sleeping bag seems somewhat profane in the light of everything else, but thus even heightens the effect. But wouldn't the atmosphere fit Beltaine rather than Samhain?

It's difficult to remember that i don't like this kind of story when they are so well written!

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The language in this little piece is breathtaking. I read this, and went straight to your authors' page to see what else you'd written. Brava.

Absolutely marvelous! As always.

You've created a wonderful mood here. I can imagine it perfectly.