I enjoyed this I hope you come back and update this and or rewrite it as you talked about and as for a third girl for naruto why not Samui if the other boys are jealous already imagine how jealous they will be to see Yugito, your OC and Samui in his arms

Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on the story.

I think I know what happend here, first you were thinking in your head 'oh this is going to be a good chapter' but then you type it down and realise that it's complete shit that doesn't make any sense what so ever. I'm not trying to be mean it's just how it is.

like

let me know when you rest this story cuz it was a good story intil next time. Ja ne

gaara with the little orange book thats a funny twist

sofar so good. try to update soon.

suuuuuuuuuuuucked

this first chapter sucked.

*removes his Jaw from the floor*

BLOODY HELL!

You are full of surprises! In the positive turn i mean.

Please continue the story very very soon.

i thought he said that he was addicted to bondage

wait, what happened to Kirabi?, he's also part of Kumo and a Jinchuriki

please hurry and get the new version of this started

please update soon

I hope you continue this story, I think it is really good and giving Naruto two hot girls and a hot teacher for the test is better, who knows he may get her to join them in bed and thier bedroom games