Reviews for Hearts of Darkness First Draft
Guest chapter 10 . 3/19/2018
this is a really interesting story! i like the setting and the cannibalistic background. it's a bit unsettling, but very different from the other stories on this site. I definitely see Wipu was inspired by The Persian from Phantom of the Opera. A side character that tries to point Erik in the right direction. I would love to know more about Erik's backstory and why he is there! also I would love to see more interactions between Erik and Christine! I really hope you continue this story and post it!
HeartsBroken chapter 10 . 2/2/2014
this story gets better with every chapter! please update as soon as possible! i can't wait to read Erik and Christine's first encounter (where they actually talk and interact lol) i really hope you continue this story!
Faults of the Soul chapter 10 . 3/16/2013
Please update! This is a very unique story, and well written too!
SixOneSix chapter 10 . 3/15/2013
more!... so awesome...
pamelawright chapter 10 . 12/11/2012
Ahh! Why did I read this, seeing how long it has been neglected! In your words, it is very compelling, and a damn shame that it has been set aside for so long.
crazykrew chapter 10 . 7/22/2011
more?
Precious Thing chapter 10 . 5/31/2011
Omg please continue!
rsbstarz chapter 10 . 12/13/2010
Wow this story is great ypu have to finish it. I really want to know what happend next. :) and please let us know if your not going to update
25travelbabe chapter 10 . 6/6/2010
Oh my gosh I am so eager to know what happens when Christine meets Erik again. Please update soon. If you decide you're not going to finish please atleast let us know. Hope you plan to continue the story.
Wandering-Recluse chapter 10 . 5/3/2009
Update soon please! It's been far too long! I want to know what happens when Christine wakes up! This is very interesting, especially since Erik doesn't wear a mask. Poor Christine, seeing Thomas and her friends die like that. That should shake up her mental state for a while. Please, update soon!

-W.R-
October Thorne chapter 10 . 11/21/2008
mur:))

i likey

Hugs and Kisses,

The Review Fairy (aka October)
anonymous chapter 10 . 11/9/2008
Please write more! I am curious to know what happens next! Review!
Angelspot chapter 10 . 10/24/2008
I really like your story. Just as an Idea You should have a scene years from now or then were Christine and Erik are together with children. Raoul goes over there for research and tress pass on their land so he/and crew are taken to be judged. Raoul neels on the ground awaiting his fate when Erik and Christine on his arm come out. Christine wearing something very simpler to Pure's black dress from Carmed in Bride and Gloom. (The Nearest picture I could find is at . . )And they let him free but Christine and Raoul say their goodbyes to each other.
strodgfrgf chapter 10 . 10/23/2008
ooh erik's past! creepy! update soon please! im eager to see christine's reaction when she wakes up.
musicxlax chapter 9 . 10/21/2008
this is a great story! i really hope you plan on continuing it. it has wonderful pontential and i think you could keep it going for as long as you want! please update son! : D

~Animal Lover
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