This story had a really good premise and could have been a lot better if u added more chapters and explored their feelings... it was too rushed in my opinion...nevertheless still a good quick read!

Poor Ron. Just like a woman jumping to conclusions!

Good job! Some grammar errors, but overall a very good story. I find Ron cursing to fit his character, somehow. (J. K. Rowling was going to write Ron as a curser, but her editor made her change it.)

This is so sad :( but i've hope all will go well :) very well written btw, lovely first chapter!

Your a little confused...Ron is the guy who calls Hermione names, abandons her because of Harry's broomstick, yells at her because her cat does what cats do, makes fun of her study habits, belittles her at least twice in every book, and abandons her in a tent, in the middle of winter, during a war!

Viktor is the guy who saw her beauty before she got her teeth fixed and hair straightened, took her to a chaperoned school dance, and loved her enough that she became the most important person in his life. More than his friends, teammates, and even his family.

I hate when people put that jerk Ron on some pedestal and just forget that he is just as much of a purebloid bigot as Draco is. While they bash a 17 year old who loves a 15 year old. (ages based on data from HP wikipedia and Pottermore)

Amazing reading it again! D

Cute little story. Other than the grammar issues, make sure in the future to space out your scene jumps. It gets confusing when it jumps from one convo to the next, example being the jump from the convo of Vanessa telling Hermione that Ron was in love with her, to the part where Draco comes in and talks to Ron. Still a nice read though.

That is so sweet! :3 why doesn't happen to me? :/
(Why is rated M by the way?)

Aww. Very Sweet. Glad Viktor is in jail. Glada R&H got together

Wow they lived happily ever after. I loved this fic. I wish they had a sequel.

Crysatl

That was a great story. Ron/Hermione are the best couple ever!

I found this story a little late, but better late than never :)

I really like the story as a whole, it was great. I did feel you rushed the last two chapters a bit but other than that is was a great read. I'm going to check and see if you have any other stories!

aw :) *high pitched fangirl squee*!

FINALLY! A good abuse fic! You seem to be one of the few fanfic authors who can actually spell. Thanks.

love it! short review cause i just want to save my place til i can come back!

jessi