:) ! Love it! So glad other people also ship Guy/Jade

That was fun. ToA was a game full of wonderful yaoi possibilities, nice work.

:O i cannot discribe the awsomeness of this story... x3 SUGOI~!

HEEE! How cute! I liked! Been looking for some Jade/Guy stuff.

*giggle* Anise is scary. I like how you worked that *nibble* select skit into this.

Well written. Good read.

Haha, that was extremely good. I don't usually read much PWP, but I thoroughly enjoyed this one.

hot!

Hahaha, I love it. I found it cute and adorable. Hot smex :)

It was gold.I like the story a lot.

Oh my. Sexy time. Err... anyway. I don't know what to say. It was well-written but I can't help but think Jade was out of character. Oh well. I was desperate for Jade getting some love from someone other than a self-insert which is how I stumbled upon this. Sorry to say I've realized it's just not my cup of tea. In my mind, Jade belongs to Anise and I can't see Guy with anyone other than Natalia or Luke.

About "kabu." I don't recall the US release putting "nibble" in there. How awkward. As it turns out, "kabu" is the sound effect for Jade pushing his glasses back. They also translated Jade's "oh" in the cool guy skit to "blush." The one where they try to undress him. Whoever translated it was seriously confused or had a very dirty mind. Possibly both XD

LOL! When I played the game and that little

nibble

came up, I wasn't sure I was seeing straight! That was so fuel for yaoi! And within, like, 4 hours of the game...

Anise seems world savvy beyond her years. Wouldn't be surprised if she turns out to be a hundred or something(haven't finished it yet)

Poor Guy and Jade must be exhausted now. No wonder that fricken machine killed me on the boat from Chesadonia, my poor party members are fucking themselves ragged.

Seriously though, good job. I think only one spelling error jumped at me but the rest was so wonderful and thoughtful and LOGICAL that I didn't mind.

This is very, very hot!

I do have to admit that there are some slight typographical errors, although usually people don't catch 'em unless the grammar was pounded into their very bloodstream. (Oh woe me~)

Uhm. I felt like the characters weren't too much in tune with each other, and the plot to zoomed by a little bit too fast for comfort (PWP though, so I understand the situation you're in) But giving it a bit more thought would such a treat to read.

But in a lighter note, I really do enjoy your writing style. I love your added sarcasm and why you get things moving along is rather smooth. (Fast, but smooth) You make things easy to visualize and keeps the reader going.

So, pretty good job! :D

So, I wasn't the only one that noticed that little nibble Jade did? I like it! Great Job! *thumbs up because yes I am that lame.*

Wow... just wow. I loved this so much X3! It totally made my heart flutter XD! This was really great, and I can't wait to see some more work from you _!

why oh why couldn't TotA have been a yaoi game! *lament*

well, i can get over it with amazing fanfiction such as this.

i have the urge to start a new game to see that scene again. (since i was an idiot and saved over my first playthrough after beating it)

yosh! Jade cursed! aside from the initial deflowering of Guy, which was nice to read and reread, Jade swearing just that once was my favorite part.

awesome fic!