Whoah... another powerful song, again different from the ones earlier. I love the hope and power of this one, and the insights Zuko gains. And I love, love the line 'And hope will burn in flame-scarred eyes'. Absolutely beautiful. :D

Whoah, given I'm a massive fan of Zutara, that was absolutely amazing! I love how you encapsulated both of their feelings like that. This song also had a different feel from your others, deep in a different way. The beat came through very strongly in this one. Amazing work. :D

Hmm... this really made me look again at Zuko's relationship with Ozai. The almost unwavering loyalty shown here was pitch perfect, well done!

Just a tiny, nitpicking note, though, I think 'exhile' is actually spelled 'exile'.

Aside from that, awesome work. Really encapsulated Zuko's angst in this area.

You were right, that is an amazing metaphor for Zuko's childhood. Well done.

Whoah, that was amazing. I especially loved the line 'Could fire have a heart of ice?'. Incredible. Your songs/poems seem to get more stirring and evocative with every step.

Impressive, searing imagery. Loved it.

You have a strong and stirring way with your words. Thanks for the great read. :)

i just gotta review this one again- (at least i think i have already) but i love the line: "Perhaps we could dance like the sun on the sea?" i just love that! AWESOME! lol you're getting kinda random love from me today XD Um, if i could get your permission to quote that...? pweaz? i don't know why it's so appealing to me, i guess it's just so visual and it sounds Zutaray, y'know? well duh you wrote it but yeah, anyway rock on dude!

THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL! YOU ARE AMAZING!

i loved the line: "a phoenix will rise from your pyre..." dunno why, just lovely i guess!

AND THEN MY FAV PART EVA!:

"Somewhere in that meadow, untarnished by Time,

Through sunshine a prince and his father still roam-

Someday at World's end, through Dawnrise we'll climb,

And I, once the exile, will lead you home..."

BEAUTIFUL, MY FRIEND! XD so yeah keep up the awesome work!

Wonderful...I kinda mentally made up my own melody to this song...it was really awesome, the words and emotions in it were exhilarating...I'm a fellow fan of Zuko, he's got his faults, but then again, everyone does, so you gotta love him! Am I right?

Go Zuko!

beautiful, as always!

oh ma gawsh! amazing! as usual! in my head i was seeing this scene in like a Shakesperean setting with Zuko saying these words. lol XD- awesome job! wow!

zuko rulz!

~jeccelo

This is an absolutely beautiful song. I'm going to fav it so I don't lose it. You have such a wonderfully evocative style and you get across Zuko's experience with amazing eloquence. Thanks for sharing it.

holy crap this is amazing! gotta read the others! awesome job!

Good. "I can't keep burning forever..." is very interesting in light of the third season. You have some lines I like especially: "perish deceived!", "I won't rest till I've repaid you/The fealty a son ought to give" (though the colon at the end of that is a bit odd).