Pretty good for as far as I read. I stopped right after chapter 11 because I didn’t want to see them become too cliche in the FanFiction areas. I stoped right when it felt like a soft and sweet ending.

pressing on a woman's stomach during birth to help force the baby out? That's a sure way to cause tearing and excessive bleeding. If you did that, that would probably have killed Tohru in real life. If a situation where it is difficult to get the baby out, a change in positions would be more reasonable, or if the situation is dire, the doctors would do a emergency C-Section.

Hello!

What a wonderful story to read, I loved your writing style and the plot was great! I did not read the manga, I only watched the anime and it was not clear to me who Tohru would stay with, it was sort of a love triangle to me. I know the manga probably makes it more clear throughout the story that she stays with Kyou instead of Yuki and show their relationship grow; however, I am unsure of how to put Yuki's feelings in any other story as he genuinely loved her (in my opinion at least). I think I like her with both of them, but I never imagined Yuki's love as that of a "mother/son" type. It did surprised me but it felt right with your story. I loved that you included all the characters and it was a very sweet story. I wonder how the manga handled Kagura too... she seemed okay in your story lol Anyway, great story, thanks for sharing!

Thank you for your work.

Kyo.

soooooooo... im guessing they never changed their mind about keeping the baby? but whatever their decision was i really really loved this fanfic!

I definitely LOVED this story. Your writing style and the story plot made this story very enjoyable! I never really read chapter fanfictions, but this... this story heightened my expectations for your work!
You did an absolutely great job, and I enjoyed every word that I read. I hope you go further in your writing than just fanfiction!

I made an account just so I could review this.. I absolutely 100% LOVED this one. I am about to look for the sequel. You are an amazing writer. I really want them to keep the baby! Or at least have like an open adoption or something.

Right here, in this chapter, I began to fall in love with you.

Steamy ;) Lol. Ha, her eyes are BROWN! No one seems to grasp the fact that Tohru's eyes are BROWN! DX

Love the story! It's so great XD But, they only have three years of highschool in Japan... So they're also only seventeen when the graduate! _ _

Why you no update story?! TTATT I wish to see the outcome of all that awesome stuffs . . .

This story is very good. I am only on chapter 14 but I am quite impressed, very good job :)

This is a very exciting book! You can make yourself a writer one day. Keep up the good work!

This was my first fruits basket fan fic and it was good, i hope to read more from you soon!