I did not read it. I just saw your photo

Okay, so I really like this story. I think the plot is cool, and I adore your Remus (and Sirius, and Draco, and Harry, and Ginny). Basically, I think this is pretty awesome. There is one thing, however, that I don't like so much. I feel like the way you write about Harry's cutting, depression, and "emo"ness kinda undermines and makes light of the situation- like it's not too serious or doesn't matter. If you really said half those things to a depressed cutter, they would react badly, not shrug it off. I'm almost certain that this was unintentional- but it might offend people, or give people inaccurate/twisted ideas about such situations (like Harry's reaction to being cut?). I'm sorry for lecturing, but (other than this) I adore this fic, and we are talking about a very sensitive topic. I did enjoy reading though, so good job.

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!

xxBoysNoizexx here!

OK, this story shows it's potential. Certain fate has been avoided by you braking the timeline, which is jam. No problem. I enjoy it. Here's what you wanna work on, and these are simple things. Definitive details. The more details you give, the more the reader becomes a part of your world. This includes realistic speech, which you have glossed over with a very fan-fiction-eque appeal, where everyone is very good with their words. Pay attention to how people talk in real life, and their mannerisms. You know how you speak, and can possibly put yourself in this story and replicate yourself word for word. So do that for other characters, flesh them out and give them human qualities. The nicknames are something to be avoided, because people don't usually spout nicknames all the time. This is pushing a realistic element that I'm sure will delight your readers.

well good 4 draco playing hard to get grate ch update soon_

lmao i like how remus randomly yells "harry looks sexy without a shirt on" :)

Aw puppy love lol

your a brilliant author ilove this story update soon_

Great story so far! I'd love to see more)

Linoria

Well, first of all: great story!

Now, I'm not trying to sound like an annoying bitch or something, but I noticed a few mistakes regarding the Skele-grow. I thought that taking the potion would be painful, seeing as the bones literally have to grow together. And I find it strange that Harry has to take the potion multiple times for just his wrist. If I can remember correctly, in the second book when he loses all his bones in his arm, it only takes one night to heal them all with the help of this potion.

Sorry if this annoys you, but I'm just so confused.

x

Melissa

OMG PLEASE REVIEW I LOVE THIS STORY!

Thats an awesome story I love it! Can't wait to read more!

Gasp! Making us wait for another full year would be horrid and very drastic!

Actually i was very surprised to see this story updated, but for some reason kept thinking of it from time to time when i was bored on fanfiction.

YEA! YOU UPDATED

Nice chapter!

Amber