That was amazing! I loved reading it! Great job!

wow that was interesting

I loooove this!

Interesting and well written story that got more captivating the more I read. I enjoyed it, thank you. *smile*

/Dragonwolf

this is so amazing.

it's a one shot, yet it took me on a journey.

keep up the good work.

aww cute 3

Aww, this one is an old favourite for me. Actually if it's not already favourited I'm gonna do so. I particularly like the little snippets of Sasuke's family in this, and of course Naruto's family too. Oh and the smut was hot XD

(i'm torn between ending this with "All Hail Lelouch" and "Pasta."

wow...just wow..I ADORED your story! Ive like re-read it so many times .;;

i love it- such a heartworming story

love sasuke's sarcasm (haha)

thanx

this was a very well written story which was realistic and had good flow.

That was one of the best stories ive read

it was just amazing o

i love it

Whoa! Such a long story! Woohoo! (o) My my, this requires what I call a live review, which consist mostly of writing the review as I read the fic instead of writing it after I finished reading. I hope you don’t mind the nonsense my brain will spurt, because that will probably be that. XD

Ew. What a nice description of Tokyo… The part in the bus was rather appalling too. I know I always repeat that, but I love your detailed descriptions: they make me so immersed in the story, I could almost smell all those awful odors floating around. Though I’m happy that I didn’t really have to smell them; just their description made me want to gag…

Oh, Sasuke wants to jump from the bridge! Ah, but at least Naruto is there to prevent that… I hope. XD It’s kinda mysterious, those dreams that Sasuke has about he and Naruto being ninjas (I can only guess it’s that, what with the words “Hokage” and “genin”). I wonder if Naruto has those same dreams too. Ha-ha, the rescue mission was successfully completed: Sasuke is not dead. But now Naruto has to drag a bitchy and cursing teenager along with him. I’m sure the blonde didn’t expect that when he went out that night. XD

I love Naruto’s house: “posters of scantily clad females and old school anime hanging on the walls”, but also a “panda-decorated sofa” and millions of plants, a mess of scattered books and pieces of clothing… No wonder Sasuke felt reluctant to enter in it. XD But what is his problem with cacti? I find them cute! *poke her own cactus*

Ahh, a dream! The Haku episode, huh? Are they only innocent dreams, or flashes of a past life? (_~)

We met Kiba and Shikamaru! Well, we didn’t really “met” them, but we know that they are Naruto’s friends, so we will eventually meet them and then we’ll be able to say that we… Okay, I stop ranting. XD Anyways, I’m happy that Naruto’s parents aren’t dead. Often in UA stories, Naruto is an orphan who had an impossibly tough childhood. It’s nice to see that it’s not the case here.

Oh, Sasuke opened a little to Naruto. We now know that his brother and father are part of the reason why we wanted to kill himself. But that verbal fight ended up with a much different way to use their mouths… “You’re a child molester, after all.” XD Always the witty retort. It’s funny. (_~)

After Kiba and Shika, we now meet Sakura! I must say it’s nice to see other characters in one of your fics, since they usually focus only on Naruto and Sasuke. Hehe, there’s even Itachi in there..Hm, I understand now why Sasuke didn’t feel cared for. His brother is cold and doesn’t seem to give a damn about him, his father is always absent and is the perfect example of a workaholic, and finally his mother died (probably of some kind of illness), which left their residence in a state near that of a ghost house. It must be really pleasant to live in there… No wonder he ran away. But I have the feeling I know where he is heading for this time… (_~) … And I was right, now Sasuke is living with Naruto! Let’s hope they just won’t kill each other. XD

Yay, Kushina and Minato! Hahaha! Naruto’s parents are so great! (_) I don’t know if they are IC, but the way you depict them is pretty realistic to me. “Naruto and Kushina were, like two street boys, fighting over a bowl of ramen.” XD Hahahaha! But ramen is so good, it’s worth fighting for, ne? XD

Argh, Naruto just had to ruin the mood once again? XD Well, his doubts are legitimate. After all, they had lived together for a month or so and Sasuke still hadn’t said a thing to him about his problems. Fortunately, that little incident didn’t prevent them from having their interesting night activity. XD

Aww, things finally seem to look up for Sasuke! He had a little chat with his father, he wants to attend school again, he has a nice place to live that he can call home and he has a caring lover. I love happy endings! (_)

Pfew! My, time seems to go so fast when you do something you enjoy. Beware the theory of relativity! XD Anyways, I really liked this fic. I don’t know what you were worried about. True, it has to be beta-read, but other than that it is all fine. I think you can come with pretty good plots, if this story is anything to go by. (_~)

Great story! I was hooked from the beginning and just couldn't stop until the end. I love how the flashbacks tie into "another life." Fabulous!

fantastic story! love the details. love the characters' personalities. job well done, can't wait to read more of your entries.

I like this. :D A lot!