I like this story but could you make a ALTERNATIVE ending where it ends as a BOBBY/JOHN ending they are a MUCH BETTER COUPLE

I'm loving the story so far, but I find that copying dialogue from the actual movie tends to become kind of boring and useless...

And Jean seems so much more... Alive in this chapter, then she was in "The Last Stand". I mean, she seemed so much more distant and violent in the actual movie.

Okay, am I the only one that is totally and unashamedly entertained when she calls Marie 'the bitch' and laughs at her misfortune? I mean, I just have to take a few seconds to giggle. And I don't giggle.

I love this story so much! I've read it sooo many time. At least twice every winter I cacoon myself in blankets and read it start to finish in one sitting! Thank you :)

i'm so so relieved and glad that john's with jamie at the very end cos throughout the fic, i keep thinking that bobby doesn't deserve John and it would be super unfair for jamie if he's rejected. so it's a really great ending, unlike most fics which just unnaturally force those 2 together (like hving john quickly getting back with bobby after being terribly hurt by him for years). so well done.

You rule.

Hey, loved the story.

I think I read almost all of your stories so far...

but anyway

I just wanted to tell you ~ POOR JOHNNEY! ! !

he lost his memory

and

he didn't remember Mystique nor Jamie in

59. chapter 30

... well thats pretty much it.

I hope to read some more of your stories soon!

p.s I think you do/did all of the characters really well ~ and the story(s)

Great story! I'm so glad John stayed with Jamie!

DUDE TRIED TO READ YOUR FICS. They're good until you start talking about Marie. Your absolute hatred of her character (which I can't wrap my head around) is distracting and takes away from your 's a shame really, if it weren't for that I think I would quite enjoy your stuff.

PRO TIP: WHEN YOU HATE A CHARACTER SO MUCH IT INTERFERES WITH THE QUALITY OF YOUR WRITING, YOU MAY WANT TO RE-THINK A FEW THINGS

Your writing is amazing! Love both of your works, I've read so far. Can't wait to read more. XD

OMG So CUTE! :D

Loved this fic right to the end! :D

and a really good ending too! :D

one of the best fic's i've ever read, EVER!

I HATE THIS STORY!

...[sob] I'm sooo disappointed... [sobs again]

I hate Jamie.

I hate Pyro.

I hate Jamie and Pyro.

Hm... but I do love Northstar... [cackles].

GREAT STORY! I hated it, but I loved it!

Eff you, Pyro. Just, eff you. You know what? I hate you right now. God, I hate love triangles. You could've listened to my advice. Could've gone 'Jamie who?' and lived a looooong *happy* life. But noooooo... Break up with Bobby will you... Which reminds me. I hate Bella Swan, too. Stupid love triangles. YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO PICK THE *FIRST* GUY, okay? Everyone, just REMEMBER THAT. Jesus...

Oh. My. God.

...

JESUS CHRIST PYRO! Just forget Jamie! I mean, come *on*. I LOVE Jamie (except in the movie, which I guess this is based off...) but hello! Bobby is obviously the BETTER CHOICE.

The theif was Gambit! I just know it! It HAS to be him!