I love that they abducted the therapist. I regret we don't get the end of the story but it was fun reading up to this point.

Poor Jack. Really well done.

that was lovely

Oh man. So much happened. Well done.

drinks blood and pisses death. I like that.

Toombs. Gah. Toombs. he's a problem.

"Because I kicked him in the head." heh heh. Nice.

That was lovely. I really like your Jack.

Great job handing off the story from different perspectives.

Too much time with oc's that Riddick wouldn't spare time with. They're not supposed to know much or he'll bail...why so much time with these two girls?...otherwise good story...

I've read this fanfic twice now and can honestly say I love it I hope you update some time in the futures :)

I have rarely followed authors because of their writing style but your writing is of rare quality. I do wish you had continued this story, but I understand if the muse is no longer there. You have a fan if you ever return to this fandom or any of my others.
Bravo on creating a story that feels real to me, keep writing. You’re good at it.

I’ll be watching for any updates.

-blu

It is a shame that this is so good. But because you quit it, we'll never get to the payoff. Your pacing is great, too few Riddick fics here, and too few of those are Riddick/Jack. You don't just jump into the relationship, but neither does it feel dragged on. And the story actually has other things happening in the background. To just let this die is... A tragedy.

Hmm. So Rachael does have lesbian tendencies then. Since this is a Jack/Riddick story, and Jack seems to be the one she's attracted to, I'm now wondering if that will last, and she'll find some way of working things out between the three of them, or if she'll move on eventually.

I like the riddles. The first of C4sper's was stolen from... LotR? But I've never heard this one with the cards. Figured it out with the first two lines, but still. Nice one.

So Rachael IS more than she appears, and nkt just an analogue to Jack, or pre-Jack Deirdre. At first I was wondering if she was interested in Jack, you put signals intentionally into the dance with even Jack thinking that the slow dance was a more boy-girl thing than a friends dance, now I'm not so sure about that. But confirmation that she's more than just a side character is nice.