I liked this story and its a shame its over but hey all good things must come to an end great work I hope we can work together again soon.

Aw... I think the only thing sadder than reading the last chapter is writing the last chapter. Thanks for sharing.

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I think this chapter turned out great we work well together.

i've been looking for this everywhere please update

I like what you did maybe you could grace the readers with a lemon soon but if you want to wiat I dont mind I am just have fun reading this bye for now.

This... made me conflicted.

On the one hand, it was completely out of left field, which took me by surprise.

On the other hand, I'm not surprised that Asuka did this. She finally admits that she likes and wants Shinji, but she can't have him, so she chooses to fight.

That's Asuka for you.

Though I'm a little shocked that Ritsuko would come prepared like this. But I guess experience has taught her something.

Still, I can't believe that she did this!

The chapter was short, well-written and all, but too dark for my tastes.

And then you have the problem of having Ritsuko tell Shinji whether or not she had anything to do with the killing.

Despite this, it was a good, but very sad, chapter.

Write on!

Oh come on! She shot and killed Asuka! Man I wanted to see if Asuka would seduce Shinj then in a later chapter after Ritsuko found out she would try to kill Asuka. This was a good chapter but I hope you have something in mind to use the idea I suggested. Speaking of witch if you have any other ideas and dont know witch to use send me a PM and I will take a look. My closing thoughts are Im not happy about Asukas death but this was a good chap I hope to see more soon.

Chapter's like this are pretty interesting.

It's almost like having a regular conversation between two people, and one of them knows more than the other even though the other is actually living the life they want.

And you nailed Asuka's personality perfectly: the strong, stubborn, never-admits-to-being-wrong, girl who won't let anyone in her heart because she's afraid of getting hurt.

Then again, that's one of the things that makes her unique. Still... I'm wondering what kind of closure she's gonna get out of this?

Write on!

Nice!

Shinji and Rei take down Gendo, and, if I'm not mistaken, it's over Ritsuko!

I never thought Gendo actually cared.

And Ritsuko is right. She's not one to judge people who have done what they had to do in order to survive. This was a good chapter. Really tense and such.

And Go Shinji! Make Out With Ritsuko!

Write on!

This chapter was really sweet, and the POV's were a nice touch. And especially the whole 'Inner-Shinji' conversation was nice too. Shinji having proved to himself, and the world, that he's more than they expected him to be.

That's a really good chapter update.

Also, the whole thing with Misato and Asuka seemed a little off. I mean... where was Maya, and Rei, maybe even Hikari? I'm sure that would have been a better group of people to bounce ideas off of.

Good work on this.

Write on!

Okay, first let me state something.

While I understand that this was a pretty good way to get Shinji and Ritsuko together, you don't state which Angel he was fighting or why he needed to pull Ritsuko inside the entry plug in order to protect her.

(I'm assuming it's either the 12th or the 14th Angel)

And Shinji is right about Asuka always throwing herself at Kaji and acting towards Shinji. I mean, if Asuka was as smart as she says she is, she would have figured that Shinji doesn't respond well to hostility or aggravation.

And Ritsuko was more then a little OOC, having feelings for Shinji and actually going for them.

Still, not bad.

Write on!

Okay, first of all, I have to say that this story is starting out of left field: Shinji and Ritsuko are dating? And they don't seem to be letting anything or anyone remain in the dark about it.

But then again, this does mean that Ritsuko isn't under Gendo's thrawl, which is a good thing.

And just what was in the box Shinji had. I can only assume what the reason is for Shinji to be secretly working at the mall and not being able to tell Ritsuko. (Guess I don't go to the right malls)

Write on!

to be honest, i despise Asuka, so trying to have her steal Shinji from Ritsuko puts a real downer on this story for me.

This is an interesting story I hope you have not abandoned it I want to see how it ends hope you continue it. I have an idea you could use you have made it clear that Asuka likes Shinji so you should write a chapter were she tries to steal him from Ritsuko and maybe Asuka tries to seduce Shinji. keep up the good work hope to read more Please dont abandon this fic.