I read ALL of your fics within the past week. I love your fic and I've officially fallen down the lwd rabbit hole 100%. I love this fic too and I could absolutely imagine this is how Casey and Derek end up in the future. If you ever write a sequel I'd be your first reviewer.

So touching, I especially loved their conversation when she told Derek she was pregnant and how he finally had a good reason for Casey to agree to him moving back home!

kudos

I usually dont review things but wow. It was all written really well. Loved the time jumping and loved the ideas. Great story :)

this is perfect, amazing, I love it!

So sweet , love

AWESOME! i am no silly American though xDDDDD i am silly though! and i LOVED IT! thanks a bunch silly canadian XDD

I looooove your portrayal of Derek.

Wonderful.

Aww, I loved every second of it! It was amazing and I really enjoyed the switching between past and present. It was a different angle on them that was very well written and gave us an insight to the past that helped make up their present and future.

Icreally liked this.

It was really sweet... I always wanted a dacey ending to life with Derek!

Great job!

~AS

Bloody Brilliant! First when she wouldn't answer the phone I thought she died...I love it!

i love this story and its really well done. the little flashbacks are really cool. i also like at the end how shes wearing the necklace. that was sweet.

~ Wish

I loved that this was in second person. I haven't read a fic like that before. Great job!

A friend recommended this fic to me, and I must confess myself disappointed. All the while I was reading, it came across as trying-too-hard. The writing style is extremely common and once a person has read better fic in the style, it becomes hard to enjoy things which are not written so well. I can only assume that the number of reviews this has received is a result of the style not being common to this fandom, as it is to many others. Although, to be fair, second person point-of-view is hard to maintain in a long fic. That is not to say the story was bad; I’m sure by usual LWD standards, it was actually good, but it seemed you relied on your fragmented style of writing more than actually had a story to tell. Although it was great you gave Derek more depth than he has on the actual show, it went a little overboard at times, bordering on being OOC. Casey was almost absent from the fic, and more than a Dasey, it felt like Derek introspecting on his life. The ending was surprising, and pretty rushed for a 6,0 word piece. It seemed you got bored and stopped writing. Well, it’s fanfiction, so these mistakes can be accounted for, I suppose, but you seem to be good and therefore, although I don’t usually bother reviewing since I don’t have an account, I felt you might be in need of some concrit that goes deeper than “loved it” or “you rock”. It’s good, but with some effort could be much better.