Reviews for They All Fall Down
Guest 8 chapter 1 . 9/13
Make spin off from this:

How Sasuke tries get back into Naruto’s good side.
Have Sasuke’s goal is to find more Uzumaki or Namikaze family members. Have him find Naruto’s parents were in coma.
Emb3rSky283 chapter 1 . 9/2
I'm sorry, but... Naruto is in the right for the majority of this fic, until he caves in at the end. Sakura knew how Naruto felt about her in this. She knew the hell he went through for her. She knew that he almost lost his life for her to the very same man she chose over him several times. She knew all of that and she didn't care. She still made up any excuse she could to justify picking the bastard over him. She still took every opportunity to crush his heart. And only when her little Uchiha fantasy didn't work out did she even glance in his direction. The depiction of Sakura in this fic ISN'T good enough for Naruto. Hell, she isn't fit to breathe the same air as him.

A lot of things can be forgiven, but the things she did? He could never, ever trust her. Period. Honestly, if it wasn't for you throwing in the whole Choji thing? I would've been rooting for NaruIno all the way through. I would've rooted for them to get married and live a long, happy life together full of love and the family that Naruto's always wanted while Sakura had to watch from the sidelines and suffer for once. And that's saying something considering how much of a diehard NaruSaku fanatic I am. She deserved to truly get a taste of her own medicine. She deserved to have to go through the same hell Naruto did. To have to watch as he married her best friend and have to suffer in silence for the rest of her life because of her mistakes. Her loving someone else isn't wrong and i won't say it was. It was doing what she did knowing all that Sasuke had done, not only to her but also to Naruto. Doing it knowing how much Naruto truly loved her and everything he did for her. She knew it all, and still tossed him to the side as if he was meaningless trash while making any excuse in the book to not admit she was in love with him. Which very, very clearly points to her not truly loving him at all. Because if she truly did like she claims? She damn sure wouldn't have done him as dirty as she did. This version of Sakura deserves to end up growing old and dying alone while Naruto actually finds a woman that he truly loves and that will truly love him. This Sakura isn't worthy of Naruto in the slightest.
Aliveeeee chapter 1 . 7/26
Amazing whahahaha. Very nice amazing story its so good well done good sir.
GoldeN ViZionZ chapter 1 . 7/1
The ending of this story was so unsatisfying. You spend the whole story talking about how Naruto would never get past her marriage with Sasuke (something I find reasonable) but then in the end they get together? For what reason, because Sakura loves him now? Your characterization of Naruto in this story is all over the place and him ending up with Sakura in the end despite multiple times saying he wouldn’t makes Naruto look like a pathetic puppy again (something he said he would not be). If this story would have ended with Naruto alone or with another women then I would say this is an excellent story but the ending ruined it for me. I have nothing against Narusaku but the way this story is written with 95% of it being anti sakura and then having them end up together makes no sense and is rather disappointing.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/7
Update soon
Guest chapter 1 . 5/4
Quite realistic. Great story
Guest 6 chapter 1 . 4/23
A squeal:

Sakura gets pregnant Naruto wonders is his or Sasuke’s. Sakura knows what Naruto was thinking. Tsunade tells them that the baby is Naruto’s.

Sasuke tries mending fences with Naruto. Sakura dies. Have a OC fall in love with Naruto but Sasuke crushes on this OC. OC married Naruto. Sasuke becomes ANBU. OC and Naruto divorce each other. OC tries to be with Sasuke.
Guest 6 chapter 1 . 2/20
Could you do a squeal to this. Sasuke tries to becomes friends with Naruto again.
Dr1zzy chapter 1 . 2/5
Great story
Kaniis chapter 1 . 1/7
I didn't like it at first, Naruto was so full of resentment. It was frustrating seeing him hold on to his grudge for so long, but the growth at the end was more than enough to make up for it! :)) Great job!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/23/2019
Naruto had kids with Ino, & Hinata.
Guest 68 chapter 1 . 9/14/2019
Have Sasuke avoid Naruto & Sakura. He becomes a hermit.
Guest 24 chapter 1 . 9/14/2019
How about in Naruto & Sakura marriage. Naruto gets angry he accidentally calls Sakura Uchiha.
Wes1382 chapter 1 . 5/23/2019
Honestly. It was pretty good.
MiharuTousaka chapter 1 . 2/20/2019
*cries*
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