Reviews for A Beautiful Mess
green899074 chapter 1 . 5/3
Reading along happily, enjoying the story. Get to the end “I wonder when the next chapter might come out!updated in 2015* ... “...oof...”
Guest chapter 3 . 9/19/2018
this is so good! i hope you come back. please. come back.
Guest chapter 3 . 8/9/2017
UPDATE?
s0ulmatch3r chapter 3 . 5/7/2017
CLEARLY YOU HAVE FORGOTTEN ABOUT THIS STORY NOW!

CAN YOU PLEASE UPDATE IT?! I NEED THE NEJITEN, I NEEEED IITTTTTT
s0ulmatch3r chapter 3 . 11/7/2016
IS THERE GONNA BE MORE?
TabooTwo chapter 3 . 9/28/2016
My heart is breaking for my girl! TenTen is so over looked :/ can't wait till your next update.
Ren chapter 2 . 6/29/2016
I like chapter 2 tho, its colourful
Ren chapter 2 . 6/29/2016
Yea I think u pulled it off. I wonder how ur love life is , in person. ?!
AButterfly'sTrueColours chapter 3 . 6/28/2016
This is a really good story. Though it hasn't been updated in a year...

And where exactly is this other story you were talking about at the end of chapter 2?
Guest chapter 3 . 6/20/2016
UPDATE PLEEEEAAASE
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2016
Interesting. Can wait to read the next chapter
uglybettie chapter 3 . 4/16/2016
Although you haven't updated since May, I'm looking forward to your future chapters!
fanofthisfiction chapter 2 . 8/16/2015
The heartbreak dealt from Neji to Tenten stood out nicely and I also enjoyed the incorporation of the elder couple hinting about love and what they see ahead for the young ones.
fanofthisfiction chapter 1 . 8/16/2015
Oh my, such a telling beginning. Having given Neji the choice to marry and yet specifying not only a timeline of union but also setting a year's parameter of bringing forth an heir was quite a bold move by Hiashi. Definitely a memorable chapter with quite a surprise to entice readers to read on.
Guest chapter 3 . 6/6/2015
WHOAH. WHOAH. WHOAH. THIS IS THE STUFF I LIKE TO READ. this would make me come back for 100 chapters. The plot, the characters, the writing AHHHHHH they're great!
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