Lovly ending

Adamas poor him

Very sweet and cute. Loved every bit.

What a sweet story. Very humorous too!

What a lovely ending to your series. I think it's wonderful to end it in a circular manner like that. I think you definitely did justice to Mamoru and Usagi's relationship; I liked your explanation of why Mamoru is attracted to Usagi, and how you made Usagi endearing without making her annoying. I think the way you wrote everyone in the series was excellent-you made them all complex, human, and interesting. Wonderful job.

I love how you managed to link the stories it's fab :) never get tiered reading them :)

Faabulousssss!

aww feel a bit sorry for Beryl she was genuinely competing for Dariens affections but she should have gone aobut it a different way. oh well, loved the whole story and the ending, great job.

finally! someone who doesnt portray beryl as a complete B*,thankyou for that. its nice to see that someone realised villains are usually that way for a reason, beryl might have actually been nice before she met metallia, who knows. anyway loved the story so far so onto the next chapter :)

AW POOR MAMURO...

Great! 10/10 stars!

love it, love it. Although I thought maybe you'd have a scene like the video one with the old ppl except they somewhat get along or something, make up- who knows? lol. But loved it all the same D

AW! SO CUTE! I loved this part:

“That is a long time,” Beryl answered hollowly, intrigued in spite of herself, “You have remarkable endurance.”

lol, such a weird comment, but I love the banter in this- awesome dialogue.

aw.. Dude this is such a good storyline like I've said b4. It is very surprising & original

Very funny )