really enjoyed this story until chapter 15 or so, then it just got really disorienting and confusing/difficult to follow..still a good story overall.

Belive me l like it but I dint like Harry’s new look

I read the first few chapters it's bad, the story has poor grammar and punctuation. There are things that you wrote that just don't make sense, like Harry being allowed to use magic outside of school just because Dumbledore said he him using transfiguration to change his physical appearance and why does he have a ponytail!?

Also what's with the different schools the first chapter he's supposed to go to Smeltings with Dudley, then in chapter three, the Grangers think he's going to St Brutus's. another thing that annoyed me was the way you changed the character's personality so drastically.

i would love it if you could go back and re-write this story get someone to check your grammar, punctuation and spelling. please make sure that you get the characters personalities, and please check to make sure that it makes sense. your story could be great if you gave it a bit more thought.

Liked that House M.D. referance. Great story so far!

Lol this is funny! But I seriously doubt Harry would actually ever be able to pull off a ponytail in the films! Still, you are a great author! Fun read :)

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love it !

It was good story. Except the final two chapters, they were kinda rushed in my opinion.

how did harry potter get down the hill?

walking...

J.K Rowling
( (just kidding) rolling)

the name's Emma Daniel Harmony
harmony HerMIONE AND HARry
emma watson plays h.g
daniel radcliffe plays h,p

Update plz!

Awesome

I loved it