Good one

Great place to stop buddy... Great place

Great

Wow! Great one

Loved it...

ya se volvió molesto el odio de naruto a sasuke. es como si creyera que el mundo de sasuke gira a su alrededor

vaya... naruto se puede comportar como un imbécil cuando quiere. demuestra que tiene envidia a sasuke aun cuando no es culpa suya obtener tanto... y realmente que las cosas materiales que le dan a sasuke como los aldeanos o kakashi no van a llenar un trauma tan grande... pero después va y se hace amigo de gaara cuando es un psicópata... mientras que se olvida de que sasuke lo salvo dos veces en el "poco" tiempo que son ninjas. (con los hermanos demonio y contra haku), naruto realmente en esta historia es un apático envidioso y con un gran resentimiento. no se da cuenta de que sasuke realmente no tiene amigos, solo gente obsesiva detras, mientras que él si tiene amigos y gente a la que recurrir, como hinata e ino, iruka e incluso ebisu

i really love this story

Great story, though I feel like it needs another chapter or two for the fallout from the end of the time loops.

coudnt the hokage use the uzumaki bloodline as bloodline? there was no reason to invent the 'kyuubi-bloodline'.

i understand our reason why you dont like pre-timeskip kakashi but i hope in the future he will get a better treatment from you cause he just didnt teach... because of his past and didnt interact much with naruto because naruto reminded him of kushina and minato. either way great ff.

so if he gets enough spiritual chakra his 'additions' except whiskers will not be created cause they grow 'after' the reset start point?

hopefully naruto soon manages to look at his calendar(he has one right?) so that he doesnt mess this up.

I get that Naruto's trying his best to break the loop but having him learn every technique is kinda stupid. Not the concept itself but the fact Naruto wouldn't use his brain to get a teammate with better chakra control to learn healing techniques.

But hey, looks like just another OP naruto fic so I guess this gets a pass.

This is more me ranting as it would be a waste of time to change several chapters worth of material. But maybe if your starting a new project or something, you should consider laying off on the Kakashi, Sasuke and Sakura bashing. Even without knowing Kakashi’s connection to Naruto you can at least argue he cares for him if not on Sasuke’s level as seen by his promise to keep them safe when fighting Zabuza. Sasuke never EVER mentions anything about being a above everyone because he is an Uchiha. His father told him Uchiha’s were the best and he probably believed that, but Sasuke didn’t just laze around and proclaim he was the best. While Sakura hits Naruto in the original series it doesn’t make sense for he to suddenly decide to really thrash him and verbally assault for just another Naruto mistake. A lot these things get really annoying, especially since Kakashi is my favorite character, so I hope you realize that while bashing like you did is meant to make Naruto seem cooler for triumphing over the adversity it has the opposite effect and makes me annoyed. I’m still going to read this story, readers can be choosers when it comes to fanfics, but I figured I’d leave this here.