| Reviews for Elementary |
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   nessiesmith2012 chapter 2 . 2/9 Keeping the main canon marker but slightly changing how u get there is just as boring as if watching canon as things shouldnt be the same. Lot of authors do this and its so unimaginative and copy and past. |
| PGriff72 chapter 1 . 5/13/2019 This is superb so far!. I’m only a few sentences in and I’m already hitched on the train and can’t get off. But I must ask is this like the movie Sherlock Holmes? |
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/14/2019 Get more chapters B*** |
| stevesgaming87 chapter 5 . 8/26/2018 And this is where you lost me. I enjoyed seeing an intelligent Naruto but this just went off the rails to much for me. |
| Rishi873 chapter 1 . 6/19/2018 Wish this story was completed but Its the problem with many storieswriters mainly) they just abandon their fic which just suck as some fic that is not completed remains on mind for more time and drive us nuts ...But sometimes they just lost their ID so maybe its same about you..Maybe your old laptop just Got disposed so you have to start new ..maybe you are writing fic from another ID Which we dont know off ...maybe... |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/21/2018 YOUR FLAMES OF YOUTH SHINE BRIGHTLY! |
| IndigoDarkChild chapter 12 . 7/27/2017 You know how to surely do cliffhangers. A 5 Year one if I'm looking at the last update. I am extremely privy to such a thing as most writers never return to their stories after a while. I have done the same. I'm not here to throw anger your way or any negativity of any kind. I thank you for a very well written story and for stimulating my mind during my travels home and to work. Hopefully, you will come back to finish the story. I imagine there was but a couple of chapters remaining to write. But whenever you do. I can only hope that father time will allow me the chance to read it. ( Posted in regards to chapter 13) |
| RG chapter 5 . 7/16/2017 Amazing story. But 1 pet peeve: DEDUCE, you imbecile, not deduct. Can you not even use proper English, for God's sake?! |
| Aiashi chapter 13 . 1/25/2017 Ahh... Love this story. Shame it hasn't updated. |
| BigY1308 chapter 6 . 12/2/2016 I hope Naruto gets as strong as Madara. The man's a beast. He decimated the 5 Kage like they were nothing but brats compared to him |
| Tesha-X chapter 9 . 11/8/2016 Good,good.A little sad but... |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/15/2016 Someone appreciated all that hard work. Also, you should parody. |
| kenta chapter 7 . 8/18/2016 Shouldn't he be more brooding and upset? I mean his wife just died... |
| Lord Xantos A. Fowl chapter 1 . 3/4/2016 I would say that most evidence in cannon points to haku being female but whatever (I can provide references if you'd wish) so far so good though this is interesting |
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/24/2016 love this story |
