Love it do more of them please

please keep going with the story

That was awesome! Love it!

Short and poignant, love it!

Yeah, I officially love the way you write :) I hope you're still writing somewhere, I think you're very talented. :)

That was great! The song fit so well especially in the end. I have one thing though in like the third quarter of the story you put - but Goku didn't have any idea what. Vegeta had "began" walking towards him,- when it sounds better to say Vegeta had "begun" walking towards him. I dunno I just think it sounds a bit better. Otherwise it was beautifully written.

The backdrop of rain, mud and lightening creates such a stark contrast to the incinerating passion Goku and Vegeta share. You are an amazing and naturally talented writer. You drive the story forward with seamless grace and fluidity, perpetually generating conflicts and resolutions that push the story to its climax. You are without a doubt, one of the top writers I've ever come across in any slash fandom. Thank you so much!

I like it !

Great, I love this one. But since it is complete (or so it says), you might want to edit this and put "complete". Well, in the box that says "incomplete" or "complete".

That way, people wouldn't get confused.

." Just trying to help a fellow writer out.

Love,

LMK

Great oneshots, both the prelude and this one, I enjoyed them both, I can't wait to see more of your g/v work posted in the future _

this was a very good chapter. being one of the most popular critics ur a good author and i hope 2 c more of ur work

Wow. This is great! I mean, Yaoi is cool when it has to do with Goku and Vegeta. Man, I never saw a G/V fic as good as this! Keep it up! GokuxVegeta Yaoi rocks!

WOW! This was superb! Yaoi rules, and so do you!
Greetz, Tisha - the one and only Royal Guard

This is masterfully written, wow...(DBZwesker sits stunned...)

hi there!

i'm wondering if you're still writing. You see, i've been to your homepage but it says it's moving to another place and i miss more of "kyomou". I could have written this in your guestbook but felt like increasing the number of reviews for this great story here.