Thanks for writing this story. I've read it three times now. Brilliantly written and constructed. It kept my focus and interest from the beginning to the end.

great story...glad I got to read it all in one sitting...some of the cliffies would have had me getting out the veggie launchers...thinking they won't be going back to that planet...even though John had some healing to go, the denouement was well-done...good structure throughout

Very good story. I think Ankera will be better off without his people in the long run, it's hard to leave family but sometimes it's for the best and who knows after rebuilding some villages he might come back to Atlantis to do more science. Loved the Shep whump and the protective nature of Ronon.

great story thanks so much 4 writting it :))

Epic story! Really well written, I loved it the whole way through :)

Great story. Very well written. Thanks for sharing!

nice... :)

Amazing story - you got me longing for more with each chapter! I am so glad that all of them got safe out of there - even the alien. Nice ending!

Just discovered your story. Nicely...very nicely done. Kept interest from start to finish. Your tale was well-developed and all the characters fleshed-out and true to form. Thank you very much for taking the time and making the effort...much appreciated.

You are very welcome. Thank you for an excellent story. Read it straight through and loved every momemt of it.

What a great conclusion to such an eventful story. Thoroughly enjoyed it from start to finish.

Just hope there is more in the pipeline for me to look forward to!

Thank you for this awesome story! You really took us on one hell of a ride; I loved how you slowly built up the mystery and tension. Great job!

You are the best! I'm kind of sad to see the story end. But I'm glad the whumping is over for Sheppard...for now anyway! Great Job and I hope to see another story from you soon!

*woohoos*

Rest for poor John at long last :D

A good ending to a good story :)

It's prettyfull.