You promised! You said you had big plans! That was the last sentence of chapter 27! WHY DID YOU NOT UPLOAD! Are you alright? Is everything alright? Its been so many years! Oh my God! What happened to Tama? How did Naruto even know about her? I started reading this thinking the story would be complete as it has 27 chapters...then got sooo entranced in it...only to find a cliffhanger and no way to climb cliff. That's right! I fell in the goddamn valley! Aaargghhhhhh please continue it!

noooooooooooooooooooooooo, Damn it. He should've just gone back... Gods messing with mortal is just stupid smh. It's like immortal beings are stupid in any dimension, Percy Jackson or not... darn. I'm not going to reads this, sorry. In my imagination, the following happened:

"Tsu- Tsunade san! Naruto!" Shizune panted, "Naruto is awake!"
"What?" Tsunade burst up from he chair, and slammed open the door.
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Hehe that kinda sucked, eh? Whatever, but I hate gods except God so much rn-

Hashirama-kun! You're not supposed to mention your granddaughter's breasts!

Sai, my beautiful boy...
Do not say a Kage has a small penis. And definitely don't say it about his son, who is a future Kage, a Jinchuriki, master of the Talk-no-jutsu, and much more.

Will there be a sequel please say yes

Any in favor of feeding evil council and danzo to Shiki-sama say "I"

Everyone: I

Holy crap! That was one hell of a chapter! So much happening.

Piece of Shit

No! you stopped! why?! come back! what happens next?!

i read if only but u sorta lost my interest here sorry

Kirk lost his captainship and became part of the bridge crew.

"His eyes turned to chips of eyes," You asked for grammar mistakes to be pointed out.

is there another sequel?

Absolutely, totally fun! Loved it and can't wait for the next installment. :)
L

. . . please say it doesn't end there
NOOO IT CANNNTTT!
IS IS JUST TOO FABULOOUUSSS!