That was AMAZING. Excellent story!

This was a wonderful and unexpected story, I liked it quite a bit. Had me on edge towards the end. The only problem I had was you didn't know when one scene went to another, it would have been good to put breaks between the paragraphs.

Best, most original one shot DN fanfic i have ever. Evil!L is something awesome, difficult to portray. Like you said, it's always Light who reverts to "goodness". But, considering that L and Light are technically two sides of the same coin, L can also agree to Light's viewpoint, all with Light being such a eloquent actor. Especially if L is in love.
Whoa. I loved this.
I know you're no longer active on this site, but I wish you were. True Elision needs a denouement, desperately. Heck, I'd write one for you if you can't...T.T
The sweet torture of reading TE is worth it, though.

This ia awesone in a creepy sotra way i likeeeee..wowlolbad typing

Good story. I enjoyed the revelation of L's living status halfway through. No wonder why everyone was so shocked and freaked out when they caught glimpse of the "mysterious stranger"!

I agree, it's nice to see L become the evil one every now and then XD Writing random stuff that's just been on your mind is very relaxing. And it really does help clear roon for stories that need to be finished...That said I still liked it. While it wasn't as deep and engaing as some of your other stories I still apreciated it.

I loved it :D and i know what u mean about l always being good :D why can't l be bad :D i'd love it if u'd continue this story

O_o Very good. I was definitely absorbed into this world of theirs. It bugs me how you won't say he's L! Because, for all intents and purposes, he could be BB, since you mentioned him having red eyes. Or was that Light? The pronouns did get a little confusing in Mogi's revelation...

*drifts to a state of adoration*

:) Great fic.

OH...MY...GOD...that...was un-freaking believable! it was soo good, and i kept getting this awesome horror film vibe from it! it really was so good! it was a bit confusing but, like a horror movie, it pretty much cleared itself up by the end. This is just too amazing!

I liked it :3 It makes me sad that everyone dies (but that's how it went) :3

Wow. This was such a wonderful read. I love the whole idea of this story and how you made L turn to Kira's side instead of the other way around.

Wow! I should stop reading your work, its so intriguing, so so different and interesting! It makes me look at my attempt and want to die of shame! Seriously, your so good at writting. This was such a good idea, it was so different. It was so chilling as well!

I read this a couple months ago, and loved it, but never really got around to reviewing. And now it's, em, a long time later and I've remembered it, and read and loved it all over again, and sent it to my friend and all, and decided that I really should review.

The idea for the fic is stupendous, and it's written beautifully. You handled the POV changes marvelously. Matsuda and Mogi were wonderfully horrified, as was Soichiro, though in a rather different way. I really liked how you didn't tell us that L was alive and everything until, well, never really. But that kept the whole mystery/secrecy/suspense/whatever all nice and flowy throughout the whole thing.

So yep. It was lovely. :D

Holy crap O_O. That was really...amazing.

I gotta say, since I love L so much and his whole Justice, rock on! thing, lol, I was hesitant and anxious about reading this- I didn't want to see L turned evil (

But seriously? The way you wrote this is irresistible. It's dark and sexy and scary and intriguing. Really really...great great job. I totally love it (:O)!

I loved your dorky oneshot.