I really enjoyed this one-shot. It shows the importance of Starfire to the team and also lets us see a more serious side of Beast Boy.

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Total summary: Good, but needs work. I tell you think because I think you can achieve a higher level. Yes, technically your work is mostly correct, and you have a good grasp of the language, it just occasionally felt like you were waffling on a bit. Furthermore, I'm not 100% sure on all your characters.

Yes, that's all the bad stuff, so let's get to the good. Again I say it is well written and you clearly have skill. It had a good flow to it and read nicely.

ps. I knew you had a specific song in mind when you first started talking about it.