Ahghfesfjervuyehyivfhehrghrbhvhbthvruh. That was the noise of my emotion pain. Crying . No maes . God no just why? This is too painful...

No please stop. Oh god . He wants to live but he dies how is that fair? You should write a sequel where he meets maes again after he dies. That might just break my heart though...

I never finished reading this story and now I remember why. DUDE. I HAVEN'T EVEN GOT TO THE SECOND CHAPTER AND I AM ALREADY CRYING.

Well now I am crying ... :,)

I know I am a bunch of years late for reviewing this but...
*hugs you*
That was ridiculously amazing mate!

I'm sorry, but there's another song ;).
Seriously, I think Mr. Olly Murs read your fic before he wrote it ó.O...
"Dear Darlin', please excuse my writing, I can't stop my hands from shaking, cause I'm cold and alone tonight... I miss you, and nothing hurts like no you, no one understands what we went through, it was short, it was sweet, we tried... But if my words break through the wall to meet you at your door, all I can say is- girl, I meant them all..."

w w w. myvideo. de/ watch/ 9108121/Olly_Murs_Dear_Darlin (remove the blanks I've added here!)

PS: OMG I've found one more song! It's incredibly cheesy, but it made me cry sooooo bad... and you have to google it by yourself, cause it seems like there are no videos available for this song in Germany :P. It was played on the radio in my car, while I was driving back home last night... so it was like... me in the middle of the night on a long empty rainy highway and then they played this song... and OMG it's really THE song for Roy and Maes! :...(
It's called "Greater Love" by Chris de Burgh. GO AND LOOK IT UP, maybe it's available on youtube in the US or whatever other country!

:...O
Again I've got no words. Riza has really been the center of his whole life. The reason why he made it through. They've loved each other soooooooo much, for decades... and there had never been a way for them... and there will never be... up to their very final minutes down there, in that circle... OMG...
:...(

Waaaaait I've got a song for this one... wait...
www. tape. tv/ musikvideos/ Diddy-Dirty-Money-feat-Skylar-Grey/ Coming-Home :) :) :)
(remove the blanks from that URL)

Yaaaaaaayyyyy IZUMI RULEZ! :D
(Can someone please take my hands away from that keyboard in front of me :P?!)

OOOOOOOMG (I've read 18 chapters without writing another rview yet! So, now, finally... I have to ;)...)!
This is soooo intense and it's REALLY like ROY is writing that... the way he describes what he's going through and how Riza is always the one to keep him sane and keep him going on... OMG MY HEART! :)

OMG, the way you write it is like... I really really would like to reply to this!

It's so weird that sometimes that's what you really have to do... to act like that and to decide like that. It's like that's the only existing "right" option. And even the right option seems to be wrong when you dare to step back and/or to change your point of view.

(Maybe *whisper*... maybe I just make up an own "fic", only to write reply-letters to these ones :)... but if I do... I won't upload it anywhere :P...)

Woooow I was thinking about that... I mean I was like... I'm sure he left a letter for Riza, trying to explain... whatever :). But in fact he even left 31 letter and SHE NEVER READ THEM, oh no...!
Have I by ANY CHANCE already mentioned that YOU ARE KILLING ME with your stories?! :P :P :P
(But I'm still alive though ;)...)

Suuuuch a good idea... and such a shame she could never read them!
And now I'm trying NOT to write 31 reviews while I'm reading this... ;)

Truly wonderful - it was so sweet! But maybe thats not the right word. You really did a good job on this though, thank you for writing this! (:

Pretty good so far. I like how you came up with the idea of using the letters. D: Poor Roy abd Riza...