This is such a great story I'm so glad that bing pick this story to read. Love the plot and the way emotions are so natural.

You are definitely my favorite Sailor Moon Fanfiction's Writer!
I absolutely loveee long chapters that are well articulated and detailed, and you always give that, thank you 3
Good luck in everything, and I guess I'll write you in the next story of your I read!

YES! LITERALLY THE BEST SAILOR MOON FANFIC I HAVE EVER READ! I LOVE IT SO SO SO MUCH!️️️️️️️️️ Such good writing! I literally want all of my bookcases stocked with fanfiction a you’ve written!️ ~LoneWolf004

Just some points need to be made:

1. What Mamoru calls teasing can actually be considered emotional abuse; a guy who treats a girl like that, with stupid and demeaning name calling, ridiculous barbs at how much she eats and how she looks sounds pretty abusive to me;

2. Rei followed Mamoru’s awful treatment of Usagi, but she took it a little farther by demeaning everything about her friend to the point Usagi started internalizing everything and doubting herself;

3. Some of Rei’s concerns are valid, because for what reason would Usagi pretend to be dumb, go really bad in school and destroy her academic career and possible chances of going to a decent College? Seriously, what can justify such stupidity? Find me one good reason and I will shut up.

4. Rei kind of got a point when complaining about Usagi’s inability to fight; from Rei’s point of view as a Scout, they work together in order to find and protect the Princess; that being said, how can Usagi protect their Princess if can barely protect herself? Rei can’t save Usagi every time, and Sailor Moon should take her responsibilities seriously. How many times have we seen Sailor Moon crying in the middle of a damn fight, screaming like a child or freezing up like a deer in front of headlights?

5. After seeing how completely untrained and useless Sailor Moon was in battle, I say this regarding her lack of fighting power, all the Scouts should have banded together and created a training schedule for Sailor Moon, so their friend could stand a chance of surviving the enemy. They should all have trained her seriously, rigorously, so she would understand and accept her role as a leader and gain more confidence in herself;

6. Instead, the Scouts started using Usagi’s “failures in corresponding to their high standards” as a way to vent, to the point of blaming Usagi for everything that went wrong; the Scouts became blind to their own shortcomings, deciding to use a scapegoat for their frustrations. Usagi was just the unfortunate chosen.

Anyways, the story is good, but those points needed to be properly addressed. Mamoru has a lot of responsibility for how things culminated in Usagi’s life. He had no right to abuse her as a way to flirt. Society needs to stop saying it’s okay for men to hurt women, because it’s a sign they like her. Nope, it’s abuse. End of story.

The guy say things that makes you feel dumb, ugly, stupid and overall low as a person? Walk away, because he’s abusive. Calling a girl fat, dumb, stupid, lazy or imbecile is shameful and demeaning, and prejudicial to the emotional and psychological state of a girl as young as Usagi, she’s just 14, of course she’s going to do stupid things. Leave her alone, people!

So why did she pretend to be a dumb blond and a crybaby? I always found ridiculous how canon Usagi would cry in the middle of a battle or throw tantrums like a kid.

I also found odd how the Senado never offered to train Usagi, especially Makoto who is a fucking martial artist. She should have helped the moment she saw Usagi fail at defending herself.

They all failed as her friends and Rei is extremely rude and cruel and I cannot understand her problems with Usagi. It seems Rei takes pleasure in hurting Usagi, and that’s fucking abusive and toxic.

About Mamoru, I gotta day that verbal abuse is not an endearing way to flirt. I would drop this jerk after the first insult, just like I would walk away from a man after the first slap.

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Excellent overall. At first, it seemed that there were some flat parts of the story, such as dialogue or character development. However, it makes up for it with a solid storyline and the story gets fuller and better written as it goes on. Definitely worth the long read!

just read this at work today it the best please tell there is part II coming

I loved it! but all this time I was just waiting for Uranus and Neptune to show up and tell at Mars. I hope you write one with the inner sensei coming in sooner and protecting usagi.

First of all, I hate that the anime made Mamoru so much older that Usagi when in the manga she is 14 and he is 16

I've loved this story, well done!

I loved this story! I like the way you built their relationship piece by piece... and that she wasnt such a pushover. Wonderfully written!

Like the story, have you ever fondue red making a sequel to it?

This story was amazing and wonderful, and I enjoyed it!