I would love to see a story about what happens after they kiss you know like the rest of the story, it could end with the children wanting to hear the story for the first time.

i like this ! so cute!

DarkC

Oh my Lord! LOVED IT! Write more One-Shots when you get the chance! God Damn are you good!

Oh, wow, this is really cute! I've always loved the ideas of Kakashi and Sakura having babies...how sweet! :)

- aw so cute! pakkun and the doggy eyes, a dangerous "jutsu"

Great storywriting, good concept with the flashback. Keep it up!

Haha! That was cute! x3 Loved it bunches!

Hecka good story! Except...now when I wake up at 3, I'm going to be looking around for Kakashi!

I was wondering why in the crap it was all in italics lol. I should have known. You're right... this was terribly fluffy... and awfully cute too I must say.

Hahaha! I love how the kissing got deeper and deeper until..."Mommy?" Oh my gosh that's great! Don't think she should be telling her kids what happened AFTER the kiss, though! lol! Great job, this was a fun read! _

Shit! *sees fluff everywhere* *starts to get dizzy*

mweh! your right this was fluffy! xD

really liked it! ( good thing yushi stopped before things got out of hand xD)

Sakura ruffled the little child’s gray (oops, silver) hair.

lol a it mean but funny! xDD

hope you keep on generating fluff! * gives you 20 ryo* * ha im bribing lol*

cya!

ai akatsuki

That was cute. I like how you transitioned from their first kiss to their kids asking about it. Good job!