Finally updated! Been waiting for it hehe thank you, hope to read more updates.

Aww still no update here. Hope this story will be continued. I will be waiting to read more of this.

waiting for an update~

Puhleaaase... update. :)

Pls update...

Waiting for an update here...
KiraxNatarle 3

Awww... still no Update? :(
Been following this fanfic since way back.
So looking forward for Natarle and Kira(Cross) to be reunited.
Plssss udate ASAP... pweaaaaase! *puppy eyes*

This is good... I'll wait for the next update. :)

This is a really good story, so far. However, I do feel there are too many O.C's, and that they tend to overshadow the established characters.

Considering the complexity of the mega cross-over story, you've done a great job on blending the different universes; particularly the first few parts where you or Saber gives an history of the different faction interacts with each other. The only thing that it could be further improved on is to shorten it. It was a nightmare to digest it as a reader, and it was a drag to read it before the start of the main story.

If I remembered it well, there were twenty plus chapter. What happened to it? I wanted to reread it again, but I couldn't find it anywhere.

Jiayou! I will be waiting for the next update.

I like this story hope to see more updates soon. Read the old version & im so waiting for the continuation. Its like kira have a harem of women here... Can kira just fall hardly in love w/ one woman? Well i was looking forward to that & i really had a feeling it will be natarle. Just love the way their story goes.
go kiraXnatarle!

It's Flay, not Frey.
Frau Frey is original Gundam, not Gundam Seed.
Flay is Gundam Seed, try to keep people's names correct, okay?
Check Mu his name as well, it's why we have gundam wikipedia's

Great stuff. Well thiught out. Will be waiting to see what happens next

Natarle can still adopt, or use a surrogate to carry to term one of her eggs (if her uterus still remains). The inability to give birth to your biological children really isn't the tragedy that guy authors seem to think it is.

There's a lot to read through, but it's gripping and doesn't bore. Good stuff.

Hiya! Haven't started your story yet, just about to, but a quick comment: could you possibly change the 'Auschwitz' in the Auschwitz Pact to something else? I understand the comparison you're trying to evoke, and normally I think highly of those kinds of literary tactics! But I also think it's possible to cross a line of good taste, and that this does. 'Auschwitz' invokes such a strong image that it doesn't seem right to use the name in fiction to refer to anything other than the event itself. I mean, you wouldn't call one of your characters Hitler - it's too much.

Sorry if this comes across as harsh, I just wanted to point this out right away before you get in too deep and it's brought up in the content of the fic, not just the history section. Looking forward to reading on!